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Try the Non-Human and Sci-Fi sections.MLyons said:I can't vote. I'm good with all of the above if they're written well.
I can't say that I've ever read a 1st person unknown gender story, though.
MLyons said:I can't vote. I'm good with all of the above if they're written well.
I can't say that I've ever read a 1st person unknown gender story, though.
Not to nit-pick, but that sounds like a 3rd person participant narrator story, not first person unknown.Dan76 said:I have, it's different. It was a voyuoer story. Sounds like too much of a challenge for me though.
Lauren Hynde said:Not to nit-pick, but that sounds like a 3rd person participant narrator story, not first person unknown.![]()
I think you're getting your POVs mixed.curious2c said:I tend to like second or third person stories. However once in a while a really good first person will suck me in. I just can't deal with a story in which someone is describing me as being in a scene. If I am not into that story line, it just turns me off. Not only sexually, but in many cases, intellectually as well.
I try to write second or third person mostly. Rarely will I get into first person. Only if the story or character view demands it, and then only briefly. Usually, I like the reader to be as if a bystander instead of directly involved.
Lauren Hynde said:I think you're getting your POVs mixed.![]()
It's ok, it doesn't matter. My answer will still be the same: every story needs to be told in the way it is most befitting to that particular story.Dan76 said:No, it was first person, there was interaction. I would send you a link if I had any hopes of finding it again, but honestly, I just don't care enough to look hard.
Dan76 said:Cool. I wish I added an option for doesn't matter. Mod help please?
gauchecritic said:Never actually tried it but I think number of options can be changed if you edit the first post. Ask Sher The Poll Queen.
Lauren, I don't 'hate' second person, but I think this has to do with more than technical skill. Are you saying that in centuries of "writing" that is why there is a lack of good second person narratives? P.Lauren Hynde said:"I hate second person" is another of those silly things. We all hate second person stories, because most people who try it fail miserably. Which in itself only means there is something wrong with the authors, not the technique.
In "centuries of writing" there have been stacks of masterpieces written in 2nd person, Perdita. There is a comparative lack because it is much more difficult to get it right* if you don't know what you're doing - as most writers (certainly most Literotica writers) admittedly don't, and especially today, when second person porn is associated with chatroom wankers.perdita said:Lauren, I don't 'hate' second person, but I think this has to do with more than technical skill. Are you saying that in centuries of "writing" that is why there is a lack of good second person narratives? P.