Which of your sex scenes does the most for you?

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Notice I added 'for you' so I'm not looking for something your readers raved about or was part of your most successful story, but the one that did it for you personally, you're own go to if you wanted to read something 'inspiring'

I know this will be a hard (pun intended) choice, especially for people who have written a lot over the years so of you want to mention more than one, feel free.
 
Mine

Megan's first seduction of her brother told in a flashback in Siblings with Benefits Ch 4, but extends into 5. The original version of this which was written a year or so before I posted it here I believe is the only the second or third sex scene I'd come up with. It posted in 2010 yet on a recent reread-which prompted this thread, I realized it still did it for me(even while noticing all the grammar issues) Not sure if its the tone, dialogue, or knowing this was the beginning of a life long conflicted taboo relationship, but it hits the buttons.

Honorable mentions Mom will do Anything Ch 2 Mom and son having sex for a wealthy voyeur paying them 50k to let him film them.
Sisters in Sin Victoria has done Allison many favors within their clandestine BDSM group the Circle and now payment is due. Allison has never been with a woman, but that doesn't let her off the hook.
 
"Detective's Gangbang, Town Secret" has my favorite sex scenes, in terms of my stories, because it's so debauched with so many people at once.
 
The one I just wrote. Ahem. šŸ˜š

Seriously though, number one in my spank bank is over ten thousand words of almost relentless group sex, one scene after another. Part 7/8 of a series. It was supposed to be the main character's moment of victorious vengeance, but she caught feelings...


https://literotica.com/s/embrace-ch-07
 
Hmmm tricky. I was going to get back to you but I think it is probably my Sophie 3 way story. Frank takes Michelleā€™s best friend 3 ways with her consent. It is due to the research on the ring he has discovered and itā€™s powers. It has to be kept a closely guarded secret but how the ring behaves and reacts with different girls is the key. Brutal One
 
Notice I added 'for you' so I'm not looking for something your readers raved about or was part of your most successful story, but the one that did it for you personally, you're own go to if you wanted to read something 'inspiring'

I know this will be a hard (pun intended) choice, especially for people who have written a lot over the years so of you want to mention more than one, feel free.
1 story, 5 parts.

In part 3 I have people doing a truth test version of The Newlywed Game (kind of) and when I wrote that ā€¦oh, man. That hit the spot with me, even though thereā€™s better and bigger sex in part 5.
 
Every sex scene in "Express Delivery" gets me revving. Some of them are very vanilla and sweet and some - especially the foursome in the strip club or the tentacle sex threesome at the refit yard - are pure excess. I utterly fell in love with my characters and made sure they had a riot. My best ones yet.
 
I'm not one who gets off on my own writing, but the most personally arousing thing I've written is the scene in Chapter Two of the Adventures of Ranger Ramona, when she visits Le Club Libertine.

i get particularly triggered by this passage:

He took her arm and walked her down the stairs. As they descended, Ramona noticed that many of the guests looked up at them. They all knew Hugo, she realized, and almost certainly knew his predilections. They all know that I just got fucked in the ass, she thought, and that notion gave her a thrill.
 
Please forgive me for pasting the whole thing, but I have always had a fondness for this exchange from ā€œAlonda/Jadeā€

ā€œI started to push up and finish inside her myself but she quickly relaxed her grip on my back, slipped down to her knees in front of me, snapped the rubber off, and put my cock into her warm open mouth, her green eyes focused on mine as she sucked.

It only took two or three pulls, her lips not going much father than halfway down the shaft, her soft fingers caressing my balls, before I felt my ass cheeks clench, my prostate swell, and my cock throb as I exploded, teaspoon after teaspoon of my ejaculate emptying into her mouth with each throb.

My dick popped out of her mouth and she looked around, her cheeks puffed out, her mouth full of cum, for somewhere to spit. Finding nothing but the carpet, she looked back at me, smiled a little, shrugged, and swallowed hard.

I handed her my drink as she got on the seat next to me. She took a long sip, swirled it around in her mouth, and swallowed. "Ugh. What is this?"

"Rum."

"The cum tasted better."ā€

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5430653&page=submissions
 
Winning Daphne, not even the mom stuff but the first scene in the book store. The book store was based after one I used to frequent back in the olden days when they had small independent book stores. Daphne was kinda based on a girl I used to see there, the owners daughter or something. I never had the courage to approach her though and that was all very vivid in my mind, which maybe translated well.

The other one that holds that kind of mental staying power with me is A Little Quarantine Oops I didn't base it off of anything but I can see that garage, what was on the other side of the open garage door. Feel the sexual energy inside as soon as the MC walks into it. It's real enough that I find myself looking into garages if the door is open, not for two people fucking but to see if that is the place.
 
Oh, so many to choose from. I think I'm primarily drawn to the shower scenes in my most recent writing, which will be uploaded sooner or later. They tend to be two or three of the protagonist's girlfriends soaping him up and vice versa. Second choice seems to be group sex play in public, mostly outdoors exhibitionism, although two such scenes I wrote a couple of weeks ago have some pretty kinky BDSM that gets a rise out of me in the mental imagery.

But thinking about it, I get considerable satisfaction from the multiple scenes where the protagonist and a particularly diminutive girlfriend ("a spinner") surreptitiously screw in public, her skirt concealing their lap fucks. It's become a practiced art for them, and their frequent pairing this way amuses their other girlfriends.
 
Kitty, the no-nonsense daughter of a gangster, and Arcana, the shy and abandoned daughter of a goddess. Their whole thing just about melts my brain, every time. Whilst still being ridiculously cute.

She squirmed with the dress, only halfway getting it over her head before she heard Kitty hit the floor in hysterics. She half sat there, arms poking skywards, with the dress stuck in her face and snapped, "Are you going to laugh at me all night, or help?"
https://literotica.com/s/arcanas-path
 
I wrote a long threesome scene where two girls never learned the third girl's name, instead addressing her as "Madam" even though they were all about the same age. They were also the more dominant actors in that scene, which made an interesting contrast with the language they used. There was something very sexy and alluring about that for me :)
 
On-site, it would probably be the "good girls" scene in Their Good Girls, which sees a married professor and teacher duo finally convince one of their students to submit to their dark debauchery while fucking another to the point where she's shouting nonsense about the male teacher being her Daddy while on the phone with her real dad. It's ludicrous and played for laughs as well as sexiness, and I like it a bunch.

Offsite, I won't mention the title, but I wrote a consensual mind-control novel where, at the start, a mind controller sleeps with five or six members of a volleyball team as well as his sexy assistant. It's bonkers, nearly 15k words worth of the steamiest stuff I've written, and if I never top it, I wouldn't be surprised.
 
Got to be the 'Pure Temptation' being published tomorrow. Just finished writing it, and I was getting pretty hot from the wild stuff I had them doing with each other. Looking forward to see how it does, and if the readers think it's as arousing as I did when I wrote it.
 
I don't have anything specific but I love the slow build up of tension. I love reading about how someone was kept waiting. Actually a specific story I just read was by an author named Ava_Harp . She's an author on here. The story was called Rope Magic.
 
My old story AI Girl ( https://literotica.com/s/ai-girl ), the entire story is a build up to a couple of things, one of which is this super short sex scene:

She smiled up at me "There's just one more thing. I don't want to live as a toy; I want to live; as a woman." Jessica spread her legs and pulled me down on top of her.

We made love for the first time; slow and gentle, with caring. Briana watched us for a time from the doorway to our bedroom; but eventually wandered away to give us privacy, keeping her own private smile.
I basically gloss right past all the mechanics. From here on everything that would have occurred in there is in my head, based on how the story before it led me to this point.

Right after that line, I have a short epilogue or just a couple paragraphs.

The scene works for me because it's a sex scene used to express emotions.
 
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Hard to choose but I'm pretty fond of the one I wrote in "The Floggings Will Continue". I always say a sex scene is a kind of conversation and that one was a complex conversation but I feel like I pulled it off. At least to my satisfaction.
 
Usually the most recent one.

I wrote a mfm threesome I'm happy with. Some lines from it:

Andy spoke in a low voice. "I reckon she needs help to make her stay still. D'you think we can manage that, between us?"
That remains one of the sexiest sentences I've ever heard in my whole life.
Richie said nothing -- his mouth was full, after all -- but lifted his feet so as to wrap his legs around mine, the weight of his thighs holding mine further apart.
...
"Sit yourself down, Andy. You comfy? Good. Aw, you're gorgeous!"
Bless Andy, so modest that he was genuinely surprised when I dropped my face to his crotch and let his neat red cock into my mouth.
...
I let him fall out of my mouth.
"D'you want to come in my mouth or my cunt?" ...
"We're supposed to be making you happy, love," he protested.
"You are. Either is good for me, so make your choice. Quickly, now. Or I'll go back to sucking you."
A laconic voice from the corner. "And I'll fuck her, if you don't."
(Educating Laura, ch.3)

Though I'm very fond of when Adrian in Smoking Hot Ch.5 finally gets more than a blow job, after about 50k words:
I rub my cock through my pants, still meeting his eyes.
"Yup, you're gagging for it all right. ... So tell me, how do you like being fucked?"

Where do I even start?

"Up me arse with men's cocks!" I growl. "Seriously, I'm easy and experienced -- just slather on loads of lube and I'll be begging for more in any position you want. Trust me."

"Really?" He raises his eyebrows. Cynical bastard. "Well now, that's a bold claim! We'd better test it."

(The boys test it very thoroughly)
 
Not published here, but Tropical Resort is the story of a girl who becomes a woman, over several sexual encounters, when her boyfriend takes her to what proves to be a sexual encounter resort. The girl transforms from a victim to a powerful woman. after shedding her abusive boyfriend.
 
The little sex game they play in my story "Librarian on the Road" does the most for me, because it is based on a real life experience and it always takes me back.
 
Interesting idea. I'll have to chew on this one a bit to get a final answer, but off the top of my head, I'd say the final sex scene from 27 Hours makes the list, as well as the opening scene of My Sister and her Friends Pt. 02, (which is more of a denouement to the first chapter) because it is drawn out and gives a good wrap up of why the characters in the first chapter were drawn to each other and builds nicely.
 
I think my latest 'About That Kiss', just published today, had me feeling pretty invested in what the two of them were enjoying as they explored each other for the first time.
 
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