where would on put a gay incest story.

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Okay so I lost a bet to a friend and have to attempt not just an incest story (which I write anyway) but a Brother/brother story. This is where the bet was lost because I have no interest in Gay male and honestly don;t know where to start and it is most likely going to suck unless i get up the nerve to sit down with my gay cousin and ask details I don't really want to know about.

So first thing is first and I realize this is a big category problem. I was told early on incest trumps everything but I cannot help but think the average incest reader would be like "Oh my god they're fags! This should be gay male.

But I also understand that the average gay man would not want to think about screwing his brother and be like "this should be in incest". I know the tag line and story title should be done to make it clear what is in here but let's face it people do not always read them. So rather than flip the coin I would see if anyone here has done it and how they made out. also... geez I hate saying this but anyone know of a couple of good gay male stories that might give me some ideas? I have decided to never bet again.
 
First thing that came to my mind was mutual masturbation: perhaps one brother catches the other watching porn (bi/gay/shemale) and one thing leads to another, beginning with aforementioned masturbation, to handjobs, blowjobs and anal sex.
 
First thing that came to my mind was mutual masturbation: perhaps one brother catches the other watching porn (bi/gay/shemale) and one thing leads to another, beginning with aforementioned masturbation, to handjobs, blowjobs and anal sex.

Yeah I suppose a good start but what category is my question here.
 
Okay so I lost a bet to a friend and have to attempt not just an incest story (which I write anyway) but a Brother/brother story.

There are numerous sister/sister stories on Literotica under the incest category. This said, I see no reason why a brother/brother story should be treated any differently. A quick search through the incest/taboo category says the same thing.

Brothers' Cock Lust by First-time  4.11
Brother Helps Brother by writing_guy  4.28  6
Dad & I - Cry or Cum by writing_guy  4.31  32
Brother Helps Brother Ch. 02 by writing_guy  4.34  9
Big Brother's Slu tby sissy_cumslut

Oh yeah, that was just the B's.
 
There are numerous sister/sister stories on Literotica under the incest category. This said, I see no reason why a brother/brother story should be treated any differently. A quick search through the incest/taboo category says the same thing.

Brothers' Cock Lust by First-time  4.11
Brother Helps Brother by writing_guy  4.28  6
Dad & I - Cry or Cum by writing_guy  4.31  32
Brother Helps Brother Ch. 02 by writing_guy  4.34  9
Big Brother's Slu tby sissy_cumslut

Oh yeah, that was just the B's.

Okay so at the end of the day incest still trumps all so to speak. Thank you Misty
 
Put a warning in the very beginning that the story contains M/M elements, and put it in incest. At least that way, nobody can say they were "surprised" when leaving nasty comments later, and anybody who does only looks like a fool for ignoring the warning.
 
No, incest doesn't trump gay; the other way around. But from your attitude going into this, you just as well not try to write it at all--it's guaranteed to flop. If you can't keep patronizing and distaste out of a forum post about the gay genre, you won't be able to keep it out of your story.

I have a recent GM incest story posted ("Prodigal Father"), and it's doing just fine in GM.

P.S. Did you bother to check on whether Naughty_Misty knew anything about placing GM stories here? I am always amused that folks take whatever is posted on the forum as of equal value of anything else posted here.
 
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No, incest doesn't trump gay; the other way around. But from your attitude going into this, you just as well not try to write it at all--it's guaranteed to flop. If you can't keep patronizing and distaste out of a forum post about the gay genre, you won't be able to keep it out of your story.

I have a recent GM incest story posted ("Prodigal Father"), and it's doing just fine in GM.

P.S. Did you bother to check on whether Naughty_Misty knew anything about placing GM stories here? I am always amused that folks take whatever is posted on the forum as of equal value of anything else posted here.

I'm not trying to "dis" the genre. To each there own it's just i have nothing to go on. I can fudge through lesbian because i know how to touch a woman and what they like and can go from there. Incest is straight sex with the word sis, mom or little brother tossed in. I can pull off BDSM because I spent several years in the lifestyle. But GM I have nothing. No experience and no offense but no real desire to learn but I don't welch bets and plan on giving it a shot. I'm fairly competitive so I figure if I can get a starting point I'll make a solid effort because it has to be put out under my name.so I don't want to tank it.
Someone suggested to me to write straight sex scene then go back and using it as an outline "paste in" a man in the woman's part. That sounds a bit dubious.
I will check out a few of yours you've pretty much made a living out of it and you have an "affinity" for it so to speak so I am sure they are good.
 
Put it under GM, I think. Just let readers know it's an incest story upfront.

I don't get why you think you can't write GM, though. You're a guy, and you know what feels good to a guy, and you know how a guy responds to sexual stimulation. Oral and manual don't differ at all in the mechanics. Neither does anal penetration when you get down to it. The only thing not in play is a pussy. So I bet you could write it if you can just find a way to get "into" the characters.
 
Unless you are into a lot of hate mail, post under gay male (but clarify the incest role). Of course, if you enjoy the most horrible abuse, post it under incest - but indicate it is gay incest.
 
I've posted a couple of gay/bi incest stories, I put them in Incest/Taboo but indicate the bisexual content in the description. I've never had a problem doing it that way. Never received any abuse or anything like that.

I don't know what to suggest to motivate you. My stories were pur fantasy stroke fests and not intended to be realistic. They are quite popular, I've been told I'm one of the best action writers in gay male (a dubious honour for a straight guy). But if you want to look them over and they help you out that would be great.
 
As for what you know -- alana9 has written a lot of GM fiction and has a couple published under MJ O'Shea. She's a woman, so has even less direct knowledge of gay male sex than the OP. Read up a little and use your imagination, I guess.

But I'd agree -- if you don't want to write a GM story, don't. I think your dislike will come through in the story and then no one will like it.
 
As for what you know -- alana9 has written a lot of GM fiction and has a couple published under MJ O'Shea.

?? Is alana9 someone who has posted to this thread?

Most writers of GM erotica seem to be females, incidentally.
 
I was on Lush and in their gay male story section there are some incest stories there. Surprisingly those are the most viewed so I don't think there should be a problem posting it there.
 
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If you are not writing this from a true sense of inspiration, don't invest the time to do it. You'll have to focus on the same degrees that make hetero incest work. The sex is a way of establishing greater intimacy and trust. If you can't do that, don't write the work. You have to respect the genre and the audience that reads it. I would trust SR in the posting of the story. Read a few of GM stories and if you can't find them erotic then don't do the story. It will be a disservice to your writing abilities and the audience itself.

You know it's funny because I had posted this awhile ago and didn't realize people were still occasionally responding to it.

I had actually come to the conclusion that you have just stated and told the friend pick another story or I will settle up another way.

I read a couple of GM stories and can honestly say there is no way in hell I am going to write one. At first I figured I would "challenge" myself and that if I were good I could write in any category (see Many Feathers he's hit them all and equally well)

But I could barely get through reading them let alone put something up that woule even be remotely readable. If I went forward it would not be good the readers would kill it, and at the end of the day what am I proving to who?

There are many people appalled by the incest stories I write and say they could never write it so shoes on the other foot here. I am no homophobic but like many men (an women) find absolutely nothing attractive about to men "going at it".

so thank you everyone for your input but at the end looks like I'm "welching" the first be t of my life
 
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