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JaxRhapsody

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I have another story I want to post but I don't know what section it should be in. The main guy is bisexual but in the closet. Things happen. He's in college Well here's a first chapter preview for Rayne Falls.


“Hey, whassup dawg!” is what’s normally heard on campus by the guys. “Hey daddy!” is what’s normally heard by the staff. Who are they talking to? Just the one and only Rayne, that’s normally heard on campus by the girls. “Sir, you’re going to be a success one day.” Is all. When Rayne is around, that’s all you’ll here on Earnhardt University’s campus in Velocity, KY. When it Rayne’s it pours. Funny thing is being popular here is like being popular at any other ol stereotypical college. Rayne’s a auto jock. See in Velocity, the automotive industry is strong So most extracurricular activities and some courses are about auto racing or auto repair. Anyway he stands 6’4 250lbs nice and light skinned you’d swear his momma coulda been white. Fine ass abs, six pack, no one pops a clutch like Rayne.


“Are we gonna study after business management class, you promised you’d help me, Rayne.” Asked Marisol.

“If that’s what I said, that’s what I’ll do baby. Your dorm, or mine?” Rayne slyly replied .

“I guess my room. Besides the new girl may need some help too.” Explained Marisol.

“Cool, I’ll see ya later then. Don’t forget to tell her the rules of study night.” Rayne sexually hinted.

Of course he could have anybody he wanted. Even the chicks him and his crew make fun of takes to getting fucked as an apology. Just to be dissed again the next day. At the scene, outside the cafeteria, the day after the sexy threesome.

“Look at this guy here. Dudes like all nerded out. Lame ass nigga.” Joked Cole.

“Ri-ight! Are you serious right now. He looks like he does trigonometry for a hobby.” Said Marisol.

“Oh I know pi to the last digit, lookin ass.” Yelled Rayne.

“Fuck you, Rayne.” Said the guy.

“Aww shit, lil gay Urkel gotta back bone. Let me have a word with you in my office.” Ordered Rayne as he Vinny and Cole walked him to the bathroom.

So Rayne get’s him into the handicap stall and lays him a punch to the side, while Cole and Vinny hold his arms.

“Are you tryin to be hard, son? I am the best this school has, no car or driver within miles is as good as me. I think you need to apologize to me.” Demanded Rayne.

“I don’t (cough, hack) owe you shit. You guys strut around here like kings and queens. Some people are getting tired of putting up with you guys. It’s funny cause everybody wants to be you or with you or your friend, but it’s like nobody has a chance. NO Respect.” Said the guy.

“Fuck you dawg. See where jealousy takes you. I have a Mustang, you got a moped, yep I seen it.” Rayne goes to punch him in the stomach. “You need to learn respect. And a lil Humility.” Rayne grabs his wallet and dibies up the money with Vinny and Cole.

The board is going to hear about this.” The guy wheezed.

“Nobodies gon’t here shit man, know that.” Said Vinny.

“I’m out. Do as you must.” Said Rayne, as he walked out the stall.

“Swirly time!!” Yelled Cole and Vinny.

Rayne steps outside the bathroom. To go to the garage, when some guy is about to walk in. When Rayne looks down at him he thinks to himself; damn he’s kinda cute.

“You don’t wanna go in there right now, no witnesses, please.” Pleaded Rayne with non chalant as muffled screams and maniacal laughter creep past the door.

Later that evening after fucking his sixth chick of the day. Rayne is sneeking out to his car to take a small trip around town. To the stillwall area of Velocity.
 
Jax,

Your category choices, followed by Lit's description of them, are cut and pasted below. Without reading the entire story and it's sexual content, it's impossible to tell you where to put it. Based on your setting, etc., I highlighted the most likely candidates in blue. Narrow it from there.

As you'll notice, unfortunately Lit has no "Bisexual" category. There's some periodic whining about this omission.

If you want my $0.02, your main character's closet bisexuality is going to be a bit of a stumbling block and here's why: for the heavily hetero readers, Rayne's bisexual thoughts and comments are going to be a turn-off if you place the story in anything but "Gay Male." Yet Rayne's heterosexual acts may make him less appealing to homosexual readers who read from the Gay Male category if you put it in there. See the pickle? There's no "Kinda Gay Male" category. ;)

I'm not saying not to write your story; I just want you to know what you're in for. On the bright side, I've written things I was pretty sure people here were going to hate and been pleasantly surprised by the response. You just never know.

G'luck,

-PF

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Thanks. I've been writing this one for BGCLive, and I thought I'd try and put it here. I feel like none of my stories are sexy enough to post here, lol. Although Rayne has more sex with guys and transsexuals than he does women. He has sex with women for two reasons; he's bi and to keep his rep. eventually it becomes harder to sex up the women and I guess I could make an alternate chapters for here or something. You've given me some ideas to develop.
 
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