where is this going? newbie with questions

[natalie058]

I'm an amateur English lover who has been writing more again lately, and I've been thinking that I'd like to submit something. Writing erotica is always something I've done for fun - for me, and my boyfriends - and I am worried that my stuff isn't really up to par. I'd like some feedback from someone who has more experience here than I.

I would say that I am a decent writer but I lack plot development. Typically, I write scenes, not stories, and so I'm looking for someone who doesn't mind suggesting some direction. I have a few pages that I've started recently, and I'd really appreciate it if someone would read and offer suggestions. I'm hoping for a first submission that's something respectable, and I am open to well thought criticism and input.

 

[CWatson]

I'm willing, if you don't mind a perfectionist asshole.

 

[natalie058]

Not at all! How should I get it to you?

Thank you.