Where I meant to post, heh!

[kinda I want to]

Is this the right place to ask for feedback on my first submission to the site? I am more concerned with writing style and technical stuff than the subject matter, but would absolutely love any feedback at all.

my story

Thanks!

 

[windstormy]

I RVC'd your story. Very nice and very different. Liked it. Was a turn on.

 

[dcraig]

Is this the right place to ask for feedback on my first submission to the site? I am more concerned with writing style and technical stuff than the subject matter, but would absolutely love any feedback at all.

my story

Thanks!

Very different......Very nice....... ​

 

[DGentleBen]

Is this the right place to ask for feedback on my first submission to the site? I am more concerned with writing style and technical stuff than the subject matter, but would absolutely love any feedback at all.

my story

Thanks!

What a nice piece of work! Very erotic. Thank you for sharing it...

 

[Doug Lewis]

Yes, it is very nice work. Like the style, too... ​

 

[spiritwalker]

Erotic. Alluring. Captivating style. Nice turn on.

I RVC'd your work and loved it very much. Going to do something about it now. LOL!!!

 

[moffettasweet]

Is this the right place to ask for feedback on my first submission to the site? I am more concerned with writing style and technical stuff than the subject matter, but would absolutely love any feedback at all.

my story

Thanks!

Torrid! Hot!! Very good piece of work, hon. Keep it up. You know you have to do another, now... *Snickers...

 

[mastergary4u2]

Is this the right place to ask for feedback on my first submission to the site? I am more concerned with writing style and technical stuff than the subject matter, but would absolutely love any feedback at all.

my story

Thanks!

Really got off on this!!!! Love the style too!! Thanks, WindStormy, for directing me to this. And to you for sharing it, 'Kinda'....

 

[athena_by_night]

Where, I meant to post, heh!

Is this the right place to ask for feedback on my first submission to the site? I am more concerned with writing style and technical stuff than the subject matter, but would absolutely love any feedback at all.

my story

Thanks!

You did a wonderful job, Kinda. I enjoyed the textures in your story both the visuals and the emotions. You got your point across very well. And well, as to the boys...lol.... you know what their reactions were....