sirhugs
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Stepdaughter, Best Friend and Wife continues to experiment with two lines of narrative. Is the series done when one plot but not the other seems done? Where do I go from here?
Where do I go from here?
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snoopercharmbrights
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The series is done when you have nothing more to say. The worst possible outcome is if you force yourself to write another episode without the necessary inspiration. See any number of sitcoms on TV which have had one or more series too many.
sirhugs
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so true, snoops, but good to be reminded.
I think what puzzles me here is that the next logical move is to have former babysitter come visit.
That not only creates a horrid imbalance, but probably means that the time needs to shift to another day- so far the story is continuous through three chapters.
for any reader who hasn't read the story or stories:
Stepdaughter's Best Friend, in Mature, has the narrator seduced by his stepdaughter's gal pal, with a secondary narrative where the galpal teases him with a tale of the srepdaughter & her seducing a plumber.
that is followed by the stepdaughter joining in , called Stepdaughter with Her Best Friend. In this story, narrator entertains the gals with a tale of he & the Mom seducing a barely legal babysitter back when stepdaughter was young.
In the recent story, mom arrives, joins in, continues the babysitter story. The story, and the MFFF sex, climaxes before the babysitter seduction is exhausted.
So, the babysitter retrospection is still there to complete, but what's the A plot?
I think what puzzles me here is that the next logical move is to have former babysitter come visit.
That not only creates a horrid imbalance, but probably means that the time needs to shift to another day- so far the story is continuous through three chapters.
for any reader who hasn't read the story or stories:
Stepdaughter's Best Friend, in Mature, has the narrator seduced by his stepdaughter's gal pal, with a secondary narrative where the galpal teases him with a tale of the srepdaughter & her seducing a plumber.
that is followed by the stepdaughter joining in , called Stepdaughter with Her Best Friend. In this story, narrator entertains the gals with a tale of he & the Mom seducing a barely legal babysitter back when stepdaughter was young.
In the recent story, mom arrives, joins in, continues the babysitter story. The story, and the MFFF sex, climaxes before the babysitter seduction is exhausted.
So, the babysitter retrospection is still there to complete, but what's the A plot?
