"When"

[KinkyKaren]

Jim Thank you for there comments on "When". I have just finished "Hot Water" and I am going through a very dificult time right now. I am sure you will understand once you read. I just like to play around and write what pops into my mind. But now I have some thoughts just overflowing. I am sure time will prove more intense writing...Thanks agin for the comments. -KinkyKaren

 

[WindChyme]

Jim Thank you for there comments on "When". I have just finished "Hot Water" and I am going through a very dificult time right now. I am sure you will understand once you read. I just like to play around and write what pops into my mind. But now I have some thoughts just overflowing. I am sure time will prove more intense writing...Thanks agin for the comments. -KinkyKaren

Did you change "Hot Water" from a poem to prose? I could swear I read it in 2 forms.

 

[KinkyKaren]

"Hot Water"

Wind Chyme,
Unless you know me outside of this site, there is no way you have read my "Hot Water" before. And even though the request have been made for me to dissect it, I can not at this time. It would be to hard. I just recently wrote it, and it is something that just happened. Maybe one day when I am old and gray, I will be able to change it. lol.. Thanks for asking. And thanks for your comments you have left on my junk. Have a great day!
-KinkyKaren