alohadave
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I was browsing and this came up in my feed. I got a chuckle out of her checking how spicy writers describe body parts.
When readers reality check your descriptions
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Pabiporffor
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She could barely hold it with both hands. Fortunately, she had a pair of tongs and thick leather gloves...
