What's Wrong With It?

[Snurge]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=351885

This is one of a series I'm doing. All the other parts received reasonable ratings, but this one drew a blank. No feedback to tell me why either.

So what's wrong with it? Is it too long? Too diverse? Is my writing not up to scratch? Grammar? Is it too wordy? Is the content displeasing?

I'm not quite finished with this yarn and I don't wish to repeat an error, in fact if I knew what the problem was I may even edit this offending part and re-insert it.

I've never asked for a critique on anything I've done in the past, but I'm prepared to swallow my pride and bend my knee to the more experienced in this case.

 

[rachlou]

I haven't read it, but I quickly checked the vote scores on all the chapters and at a glance, I would guess you haven't had many votes on each part? If the last chapter vote score is suspiciously low, it is more likely to do with a troll vote rather than a disgruntled reader.

If you have less than 10 votes, it only takes one 1 vote to sink the score to basement level. I can't imagine that there would be any other legitimate reason if your other chapters received decent feedback.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Yeah. I read the story. Rachel is pretty much right on target. The story isn't at all bad. I would congradulate you for having your own group of troll followers. We all have them.

Trolls are a symbol you are doing it right. Don't worry about it.

 

[rachlou]

Ok - now i'm home, I read the first page of your chapter. Whilst not being my thing, I thought it was decently written and certainly nothing dire sprang out to offend me. I did like the Brit references to stuff like BHS! lol

As I originally suspected - your low score is entirely due to Trolling. It's crap, but we all suffer.

Try and ignore the vote score and pay more attention to feedback. It tends to be more meaningful.

 

[Lalah]

I skimmed it and didn't see anything wrong either. Also I liked the description of "A Walk in the Woods" so much I had to give it a 5 right there.

 

[Snurge]

My thanks to all you guys for the trouble you've taken on my behalf. I'm reassured enough now to continue doing what I was doing.

I've read a lot about trolls on these forums but I never thought I was important enough for them to come around bothering little ole me. That's a lesson learned. I guess one doesn't need to be important to people who get their night time jollies by sabotaging other peoples work and envisioning their distress. One can't help wondering just how many negative hits they have to make before reaching orgasm. Sad bastards.

 

[starrkers]

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