what you think of this

[fanficnut]

I know this a chyoo story but could use some feedback sense I'm thinking of turing one of the charcter into a Literotica story. Basicly just told the backround for a chyoo story and let people run with it so some parts are basicy but gives you an ideam what the story might be like. Picking up maybe the Luv family part for a full story


All ready got an editor for the lit (the chyoo has Gramar errors)

Any advice

Create a diva

 

[Boxlicker101]

I know this a chyoo story but could use some feedback sense I'm thinking of turing one of the charcter into a Literotica story. Basicly just told the backround for a chyoo story and let people run with it so some parts are basicy but gives you an ideam what the story might be like. Picking up maybe the Luv family part for a full story


All ready got an editor for the lit (the chyoo has Gramar errors)

Any advice

Create a diva

What is a chyoo story? The reason I ask is that one of the pirates who steals stories from Lit. authors has a name a lot like that.

 

[lilguy]

interactive story

You make a story. You can add multipe chapters to your stories that spread the story off into multiple stories. People can add to those stories if you accept them as writers or threads

You can also add to thier stories.

The have a message board on literotica..it at the bottem.