What story to write?

Varun1987

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hey, i'm new here, but i have plenty of story ideas/plans. My preference is to write about older women(mums usually) with teenage guys (I would make them 18+). I want to write my first story and submit it, but i want to know which one would get the most interest, as a first story.
Here are some of the ideas I have:

1. A teenage boy is being harassed by a bully but he is too proud to tell his parents. One day the bully follows him home but his mum unwittingly intervenes. Being a fairly attractive mum the bully starts flirting with her to passively bully the boy. The mother takes surprisingly kindly to this and the bully pretends to ease up on the boy. The boy is uneasy but happy with the arrangement. However, the mother and the bully unexpectedly start having a sexual affair. The bully rubs this in the boy's face, especially using images of sexual acts with his mother to taunt him. The bully threating to expose this to their fellow school mates and the boy's father if he ever tries to break up the relationship.

2. A woman relies on her daughter to give her a lift home, but the daughter forgets and gets drunk with her friends. The mother needs to walk to a bus stop to get a bus home. This unfortunately leads her through a set of bad alleys, where a man mistakes her for a prostitute. The woman, mistakenly thinks he's trying to rape her, accepts his advances. It's only after she is paid she realises her stupid mistake, but the thrill causes her to start experimenting with prostitution.

3. A boy and his sister can't stand their argumentative, controlling father, who is clearly making their mother more and more depressed. The boy tired of living with his rule-making father helps his best friend to sleep with his mother. The plan works, splitting up the parents, the mother entering a relationship with the teenage boy. Complications arise when the bestfriend's parents need to be told, and the sister feels having a step-dad younger than her is inappropriate.

4. A successful lawyer travels the world leaving his family alone on a hilltop mansion. His wife begins to feel lonely in the isolation, and her daughter becomes very distant from her before leaving for university. She forms a very close bond with her son, as the two spend alot of time alone together on the hilltop. The relationship reaches a turning point when the son accidentally walks in on his mother in the shower and feels a sexual attraction to her. The mother is caught, by the father and daughter, giving a blowjob to her son, but to save the family disgrace the parents split up quietly. The mother/son have a pseudo-marriage ceremony, move away and pretend to be a young man/older woman couple. The couple must deal with harbouring their incestuous secret.

I have many more story ideas, but I want to write one of these as my first, and I'd appreciate any input. I think 1 might be the best to start off at, or maybe three, but I'd be writing for the readers, and that would be you.

Thanks very much.
 
hey Varun, welcome! sounds like you'll fit right in! lol you have some great story ideas - i look forward to reading them. there are aspects of all three that are enticing, though for whatever reasons, the first two story lines appeal to me more.

as for no. 1, there are some intriguing twists you can add, such as the bully blackmailing the mother because he caught the boy/son cheating or something to that effect; or have the woman accept the advances of the bully not so much because she likes it, but because she thinks she can protect her son that way, by giving in to the bully's advances.

no. 2 is kind of tricky, as essentially the woman has sex with a guy thinking throughout she is being raped, thus, from her perspective it is a story of "force", whereas for the guy, it is just sex with a prostitute. even though she is paid in the end, she experienced sex with the guy as rape, why does she end up liking it? she likes being raped? or likes being paid? perhaps rather than having her think she is being raped, have the prostitute aspect come to the forefront - she is approached, mistakingly, by a guy who thinks she is a prostitute, and offered money for sex. he is kind of forceful, assuming she is a prostitute, but it is clear up front what is going on. she is kind of passive and confused and goes along, having sex with him in the alley, or giving him a blowjob and making her $100, or whatever she gets paid and gets turned on by the random anonymity, plus making money!

anyway, just some early morning musings. great ideas you have, however you may develop them.

enjoy the writing!
 
Out of your ideas I like them in order 1, 3 and then 2 and 4 tied in last place.

Idea 1 is very hot. My husband and I like to roleplay this scene! Perhaps the mother is feeling a little unattractive and the attentions of a young man even her son's bully gives her the feelings of being desired she craves as her husband is working late to make ends meet. She subtley encourages the bully seeing it as a little harmless flirtation to save her son and secretly makes her feel good about herself again. She doesn't want to take it further beause of the hurt she would cause her family. The bully realizes and makes a plan to get her into bed. Perhaps he takes her out on a date and plies her with wine then takes her home and they have loud sex (the bully making sure the son hears it all). Or maybe he plays on her lonliness and plays being a considerate misunderstood youth to get her to fall for him. And when she does, he knows how to play her so he can have sex with her all he wants.

Idea 3 you could have the best friend actually being a kind and considerate lover and soul mate to further the sister's angst.

Ideas 2 and 4 could develop into a good reads if there's exploration of the woman's conflicting desires in 2 and the mother and son's in 4.
 
Damn, I like the idea being Number 1. Would love to see it. Just make sure to let us know when your done writing it.
 
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