What made chapter 1 better?

[blackpenblueink]

Chapter 1 keeps a slightly higher rating than chapter 2. I'd like some feedback and comments and what made it a bettter story. I personally loved the ass licking scene in chapter 2.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=187599

http://english.literotica.com/stori...y.php?id=189012

 

[Ghostbear]

Don't worry about it.

There isn't that much difference in the score. Besides it is the newer story and maybe people haven't had the chance to read the second one yet.
Don't get discouraged but give it a few more days. Both stories were very good.

Ghostbear

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Chapter 1 keeps a slightly higher rating than chapter 2. I'd like some feedback and comments and what made it a bettter story. I personally loved the ass licking scene in chapter 2.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=187599

http://english.literotica.com/stori...y.php?id=189012

In general, the first stroy in a set will be the most read and highest rated. Most people will not cold read a successive chpter in a continuing story, so they will almost always give chapter one a look. Only those who liked one will generally read two, etc. Since you will invariably loose some readers interest due to story line, plot they don't appreciate etc and you will also loose the occasional reader who might not check back for weeks or months, each successive chapter will generally get less attention.

 

[davidwatts]

In general, the first stroy in a set will be the most read and highest rated. Most people will not cold read a successive chpter in a continuing story, so they will almost always give chapter one a look. Only those who liked one will generally read two, etc. Since you will invariably loose some readers interest due to story line, plot they don't appreciate etc and you will also loose the occasional reader who might not check back for weeks or months, each successive chapter will generally get less attention.

Well said, Ms. Thomas, as if you were capable of anything less.

The above reasoning is why I have decided not to do any more "chapter" stories, and will now break each episode into separate pieces that people can read without necessarily being up to speed. That way, if you mention the fact that there are other stories available with these characters, they can easily find them without having to to keep cruising the site waiting for further efforts that may or may not come. You may find this approach may lead to more reads in the end.

 

[blackpenblueink]

The Jam!

Wish I could be like David Watts
old song from the 80's. may have been a Kinks song. Don't remember.

 

[davidwatts]

Wish I could be like David Watts
old song from the 80's. may have been a Kinks song. Don't remember.

Sixties, and indeed a Kinks song. Covered ably by the Jam as the lovely Kate.E. will attest.

I too wish I could be like David Watts, but regrettably I am not. This explains the lowercase me.

 

[blackpenblueink]

Yeah, and The Jam did it in the 80's on "All Mod Cons"
That was an awesome LP. Plus I fell in love to it playing in the background.