ok, well first of all, i was pissed cause i never got to fuck this girl before we split up, but we had talked about sex alot. so the closest thing i know to actually turnning back time and forcing myself apon her, is having someone write a story about it,... kindda like a "what if" thing. so i'll try to describe her, and myself to any writters that are interested. she's around 5 ft, brown eyes, very volupous, heres the shocker, 38DD's (which explains her back trouble) she was of Fijain descent, and has very nice smooth, tan skin, and pouty, full lips, (D.S.L. dick sucking lips) but her ass wasn't all that great it was pretty shapely, just not the kind i like. she will do anything sexually, except anal,... but i think i could have talked her into it, she also told me she kept herself shaven, she has short hair, mid-way down her neck, that has been dyed red, and she also has a peirced tongue. now to my description i'm 5ft 8, light brown/blondish hair, that was a litle past my shoulders, hazel eyes, not to much of a build, some arm , chest muscles,.... light skin,.... and my cock is just over nine inches long, and about as big around as a half-dollar,... um this may seem weird, but my cock bends downward about half way, just a slight bend( enough so she could feel it) and at the bend it gets thicker. well i think that's all for description, i'd like the setting to be like, a walk in the park at night,... and like for it to happen spontaneosly, i'd like for everything to happen, along with a little non consentoul anal sex. her name is Gina, and my name is Joey,..u can make up last names. um, any other things needed for the story, u can make up, or ask me?
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just the basics, jacking me off some, as i make moves on her, oral both ways(giving and recieving), misionary, and doggystyle, ..... maybe tity fucking, then to finish it off me fucking her mouth,... and cumming on her tits and in her mouth. i want her to get off to, say when we are doing it doggie style?... then i stick it in her ass
and i guess i'll leave the rest up to you? other than i wear sloppy, loose cloths and she wears stuff that shows her assets... good luck
just the basics, jacking me off some, as i make moves on her, oral both ways(giving and recieving), misionary, and doggystyle, ..... maybe tity fucking, then to finish it off me fucking her mouth,... and cumming on her tits and in her mouth. i want her to get off to, say when we are doing it doggie style?... then i stick it in her ass
and i guess i'll leave the rest up to you? other than i wear sloppy, loose cloths and she wears stuff that shows her assets... good luck 
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I think that Tate wanted to know what kind of *plot* you wanted to go on. Here's my take, see if you like it (I don't want to write it, just what pops into my head)
We use the actual facts and then move from there - she's an ex of yours, she's hot, you want to fuck her. You two have been broken up for some time, and one night you're out and you see her with another guy. You thought you were over her, but all the feelings come flooding back. You follow her out, and follow the car she gets into all the way back to his house.
Not really knowing what you have planned, you sit outside his house in your car nearly all night. The thought of what the two of them are doing in there drives you nearly mad. In the morning, you wake up to the sound of his car driving away - she's not in it.
Sneakily, you creep into the house. You make your way around, quietly, and find your ex sleeping in the other guys bed. She looks quite enticing, laying there, and you start to caress her.
She wakes up and is scared shitless (not literally, I'm not into that sort of thing) that you're basically stalking her. You stradle her, holding her wrists above her head. She knows you, knows you're not the violent type, so she isn't screaming or anything, just cursing you. Then you fuck her like that. Despite her fear, she enjoys it, and is soon thrusting in time to yours etc etc.
After the fucking, you two take a shower. She's still unhappy that you're there, but you tell her that you just want to shower and talk a little bit and then you'll leave.
You pour your soul out to her, saying how lonely you've been, how much you miss her, etc etc with the bullshitting. Then she lets you fuck her in the ass, because you tell her how much you want it.
Her boyfriend comes home and finds you two together, you fucking her in the butt. He is a little bit peeved, to say the least.
You have a little shout-out with him, and in the end your ex says she wants to finish. She says she wants to suck him while you fuck her ass. So you two comply.
Chicklet
I think that Tate wanted to know what kind of *plot* you wanted to go on. Here's my take, see if you like it (I don't want to write it, just what pops into my head)
We use the actual facts and then move from there - she's an ex of yours, she's hot, you want to fuck her. You two have been broken up for some time, and one night you're out and you see her with another guy. You thought you were over her, but all the feelings come flooding back. You follow her out, and follow the car she gets into all the way back to his house.
Not really knowing what you have planned, you sit outside his house in your car nearly all night. The thought of what the two of them are doing in there drives you nearly mad. In the morning, you wake up to the sound of his car driving away - she's not in it.
Sneakily, you creep into the house. You make your way around, quietly, and find your ex sleeping in the other guys bed. She looks quite enticing, laying there, and you start to caress her.
She wakes up and is scared shitless (not literally, I'm not into that sort of thing) that you're basically stalking her. You stradle her, holding her wrists above her head. She knows you, knows you're not the violent type, so she isn't screaming or anything, just cursing you. Then you fuck her like that. Despite her fear, she enjoys it, and is soon thrusting in time to yours etc etc.
After the fucking, you two take a shower. She's still unhappy that you're there, but you tell her that you just want to shower and talk a little bit and then you'll leave.
You pour your soul out to her, saying how lonely you've been, how much you miss her, etc etc with the bullshitting. Then she lets you fuck her in the ass, because you tell her how much you want it.
Her boyfriend comes home and finds you two together, you fucking her in the butt. He is a little bit peeved, to say the least.
You have a little shout-out with him, and in the end your ex says she wants to finish. She says she wants to suck him while you fuck her ass. So you two comply.
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that sounds nice, (actually gave me a semi) but i was thinking of more like,.. i dunno... i guess i think weird,... but i want it to be told like were going out, (eventhough we're not) i guess to be as close to experiancing her as possible? i thought i gave a plot? like one day we are in the park, and it's fairly empty except for the 2 of us, and we go off into a wooded area, to get intament, and after a lil wile of the softcore stuff, the rest of what i mentioned takes place. does that sound like something you can work with?
that sounds nice, (actually gave me a semi) but i was thinking of more like,.. i dunno... i guess i think weird,... but i want it to be told like were going out, (eventhough we're not) i guess to be as close to experiancing her as possible? i thought i gave a plot? like one day we are in the park, and it's fairly empty except for the 2 of us, and we go off into a wooded area, to get intament, and after a lil wile of the softcore stuff, the rest of what i mentioned takes place. does that sound like something you can work with?
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okay so it's an alternative path you *could* have gone down with her? Do you think there should be a thread (in the story) about aspects of the relationship? Build up the characters a little bit, how they interact, problems, good sides, everything...then lead up to the day that you've been waiting for: scoring in the park.
no, i want it to be one short, sweet, and simple story. it could start out something like: one ordinary day in Joey (whatever lastname you pick)'s life, his girlfreind of 3 months called him as she usually does on a day to day basis, but this day she really wanted to see him. they desided to get together today, at the park of all places, cause they were both avid fans of the outdoors... and so forth and so on.
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Volrath said:not reall, that's sortta the whole point
i doubt that i would write two of them...if i write one for you, it'll be the end of it. I'm seriously considering doing it, too (just ask stranger, i told her)
Tell me more about yourself than you wear sloppy and loose clothes.
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i'm 5ft 8, light brown/blondish hair, that was a litle past my shoulders, hazel eyes, not to much of a build, some arm , chest muscles,.... light skin,.... and my cock is just over nine inches long, and about as big around as a half-dollar,... um this may seem weird, but my cock bends downward about half way, just a slight bend( enough so she could feel it) and at the bend it gets thicker. i also described her on the first post. most people say i have no accent, and i'm a nice guy, (unfortunatly) ya know shivalrous and all that crap. weihgt...200, (i know ur thinking "damn he's fat" but for my height it's ok, plus muscles have weight to ) i also neglected to mention my gotee,... it's black.
i'm 5ft 8, light brown/blondish hair, that was a litle past my shoulders, hazel eyes, not to much of a build, some arm , chest muscles,.... light skin,.... and my cock is just over nine inches long, and about as big around as a half-dollar,... um this may seem weird, but my cock bends downward about half way, just a slight bend( enough so she could feel it) and at the bend it gets thicker. i also described her on the first post. most people say i have no accent, and i'm a nice guy, (unfortunatly) ya know shivalrous and all that crap. weihgt...200, (i know ur thinking "damn he's fat" but for my height it's ok, plus muscles have weight to
) i also neglected to mention my gotee,... it's black.penguindance
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