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[HotStuff05]

I was sitting at my desk finishing off some paper work during my over time period one night, when i noticed my boss watching me through his office door. I'm not married and don't even have a boyfriend but i would never date someone from work.
i decided to ignore his attantion to me and got on with my work. About five minutes later he came over and sat on my desk.
"Oh MrFallow, i didn't notice you, did you want something"
"In a manner of speaking..."
"Umm, im not really sure what you mean Mr Faldo"
i was getting really unsure about this.
"He moved behind my chair and before i could turn he started massaging my shoulders. It felt good after a long days work but i didnt like him coming on to me this much.
"Um, Mr Faldo i really have to finish this..."
he ignored my statement and continued massaging. After a while, he moved his hands down my back and i felt him unstrap my bra. i didnt really know what to do. He was a bout my age and quite handsome, but he was my boss!
I tried to protest but he shushed me and went over to the light switch to dim the lights.
Then he came back to my desk, again hushing my protests and spun me around, onto my feet so i was facing him.
"Mr Faldo, please, i just work here thats all"
again he took no notice and in one movement removed my blouse. my bra was hanging loose and i rushed to close it but he grabbed my hands and again shushed me.
then he removed my bra and kissed my tits. i was, despite my protests getting quite horny, especially when he started fingering my arse through my skirt. Then he unzipped my skirt and removed it.
"Oh..."
he started undressing himself and i became silent as i watched his bulging 10" cock emerge from his undies.
he pushed everything off my desk and lay me down on it. I was so horny i had become quite wet.
Then he started fingering me whilst kissing my tits. After a while i grew accostomed to his touch and just decided to enjoy this rather than protest.
when he stopped kissing me he got hold of his cock and with a free hand moved me so i was on my back, on the desk, with my legs spread. then he slid into me.
It was so powerful and so fullfilling that i started to moan. He slid in and out and i orgasmed.
then he climed onto the desk on top of me and started humping me. i must have orgasemd about 10 times, and then the office door opened and two collegues of mine, Bill and Tracey stood there with theyre mouths open. they were dating and had obviously presumed they were the only ones in the office too because they were naked.
without a word Mr Faldo moved off me and beckoned to Tracey and Bill, i think they were so shocked they just did as he signaled.
bills cock was erect and i couldnt stand the sight of the 12" monster there in front of me.
i lunged at him and brought him to the floor. humping madly i orgasmed and then noticed Tracey and Mr Faldo going at it next to us. Tracey wasnt that pretty and Mr Faldo soon became bored with her. He moved over to me and inserted himself into me, whilst Bill filled my other hole.
Tracye just started moving over to me.
I had never considered myself a lesbian but as she started kissing my tits i was overwhelmed.
We went on for ages, in all positions and with the guys humping, fingering and kissing us.

the next night we were once again the only four left in the office, and so we began all over again...

 

[_Erik_]

Captialization is needed in some places. Really short.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Captialization is needed in some places. Really short.

But not short enough.

 

[_Erik_]

Ooh! Doc, was that an insult?

 

[kbate]

I was finishing some overtime paperwork when I saw my boss watching me from the office door. I decided to ignore his attention; I am not married and don't even have a boyfriend but I would never date a coworker. Five minutes later he came into my office and sat on my desk.

"Oh Mr. Faldo, I didn't notice you, did you want something"

"In a manner of speaking, yes."

"Umm, I’m not really sure what you mean Mr. Faldo."

I was uncertain about his intent. He moved behind me and before I could turn he started massaging my shoulders. It felt good after a long day but I did not like him coming on to me this way.

"Um, Mr. Faldo, I really have to finish this."

He ignored my statement and continued massaging. After a while, his hands down my back and I felt him unsnapping my bra. I didn’t know what to do; he was about my age and quite handsome, but he was my boss.

I tried protesting but he hushed me and moved to dim the lights. Returning to my desk, he again hushed my protests and turned me around, lifting me onto feet, facing him.

"Mr. Faldo, please. I just work here that’s all"

He took no notice and in one quick movement removed my blouse. My bra was hanging loose and I hurried to close it but he grabbed my hands and again hushed me. He removed my bra and leaned forward to kiss my tits. I was, despite my protests getting quite horny, especially when he started fingering my ass through my skirt. Soon he unzipped my skirt and let it slip to the floor.
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"Oh," I said as he started undressing. I became silent as I watched his bulging cock emerge from his pants.

He pushed everything off my desk and laid me down on it. I was so horny that I had become quite wet. He started fingering my pussy while still kissing my tits. I grew accustomed to his touch and decided to enjoy this rather than protest. He stopped kissing, grabbed his cock with one hand and used the other to hold my body while he slid it into me. The feeling was so powerful and so fulfilling that I started to moan immediately.

He climbed onto the desk with me and began humping me. I must have had 10 orgasms.

The office door opened and two colleagues, Bill and Tracey entered with their mouths agape. They were dating and had obviously assumed they were the only ones in the office too because they too were naked.

Without a word, Mr. Faldo climbed down and beckoned Tracey and Bill forward; I think they were in shock but they did as he wanted.

Bill’s cock was erect and I could not stand the sight of the monstrous thing waving in front of my face. I lunged at him, pushed him to the floor, climbed on top and began humping him madly. I had an orgasm then noticed Tracey and Mr. Faldo screwing on the floor next to us. Tracey apparently was not very good and Mr. Faldo soon became bored with her. He moved over to me and inserted himself into my ass, while Bill filled my other hole.

Tracey, with nothing to do, slid over and began kissing my tits. I was overwhelmed. We continued for hours, in all positions and in all combinations, each having many orgasms. The next night we did it again.
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I don't know why I bothered, the story is very basic and is little more than a few fragmented ideas. It is at least readable in this form.

The sub characters require development, the idea of appearing out of nowhere is silly. Lacks plot.

The sex is luke warm at best, from non-consent to wanton (hi lasher) whore in 10 seconds is a bit of a stretch.

It is too short for Literotica.

More dialogue is required.

Capitalisation and punctuation errors in original copy need correction.

Either add another thousand words describing the actions or stop and delete it now.