What do you think about my stories?

[sexnovella]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1471676&page=submissions

 

[Neonurotic]

Followed your thread from the AH and decided to give you an honest rate on your poetry since I write more of that here on Literotica. Luckily, you write decent poetry and your poems are not overt descriptions of a sex act then called a poem. I give you a 4. A few suggestions if you'd like to improve your poetry are to take note not to inject too many personal pronouns as poetry is brief and other well chosen words serve best. Also, careful editing is a must; spelling errors glare. English may be a second language, but in poetry, mistakes like that are not easily glossed over.

 

[PennLady]

I read a few of your stories. They are... okay. You often rush them, even for stroke stories. Your English is good, but awkward at times. An native English speaker would probably be a big help as an editor.