what did you think of it?

[jillbird]

Hi. I wrote the story "Jills Day Out". Its in the bndsm section, although I now think I should have submitted it to the Extreme section.
I received some flattering critiques at the time. I am writing a new story with Jill as the heroine and would like to know how strong to make it. Was Day Out too extreme? Should i tone down the next one? I would appreciate your comments.

Jill Bird.

 

[star_driver]

too strong for me

I found it to be too strong but thats just me. I don't read the extreme stories so i can't say if that would be more appropriate than non-consent. For myself, I believe bdsm should always be consensual, which rape/blackmail is not.

I did think the story was well written in and of itself, ignoring my own discomfort with the subject matter. I enjoy bdsm stories, but consensual only.