What criticisms can you give about my stories so far

[ErectileKai]

I need some help on how I can write better dialogue, structure the plots, describe more vivid sex scenes and engage the reader with every word.
Any help is welcome.

 

[Salacious_Scribe]

A limk to your stories would be helpful...

 

[NotWise]

I need some help on how I can write better dialogue, structure the plots, describe more vivid sex scenes and engage the reader with every word.
Any help is welcome.

You can get a response here, but your question probably belongs on the Feedback forum.