What are your thoughts on my story “Kelsi’s Adventures Ch 07”

[WW2Mike]

This is now my most recent up-to-date release of my recent chapter of Kelsi’s Adventures:

https://www.literotica.com/s/kelsis-adventures-ch-07

What happens to a now 44-year-old Kelsi and her 20-year old adult son Kelsian in Chapter 7 based on recap?

 

[AlinaX]

Kelsi disappears on a visit back to her home town and Kelsi-Anne goes in search of her, only to fall in love with the son of the priest who is holding Kelsi prisoner in the bell tower.

 

[WW2Mike]

Did I do a good job portraying Kelsi as a cynically jaded 44-year-old mother to her 20-year-old adult son Kelsian?