sirhugs
Riding to the Rescue
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this could be your title of first line.
I see this as a story about a young couple, happily married, just now thinking of children. They both are fairly inexperienced, conservative, but have a good vanilla sex life.
The story starts in media res, and jumps immediately to the back story
hubby works outsiide the home, wife has a home based business.
lately, they have been having morning sex before hubby goes to work, to try to get her preggers. She finds this just leaves her horny, so she often sits in her robe and finshes herself off while reading the daily New stories on Literotica, a website she has never shared with hubby.
One morning, just after hubby leaves, the doorbell rings. She figures it might be a courier, or that busy body neighbour. She briefly considers accidentally leaving her robe open, but one delivery gal is very butch, not her taste at all, and that neighbour would be ffended, so she leaves it closed.
turns out its hubby at the door, he forgot his office and house keys ("dang these newfangled car keys that don't fit on key rings"). he thinks he left them next to the computer.
whooops!
he sprints upstairs before she can close the browser.
Turns out he too has developed a secret Lit habit, late at night when she thinks he's checking late night sports scores. He is actually relieved they have this in common.
Which brings the story back to the opening line.
What do YOU think she's reading? where does the story go?
who wants to write it?
I see this as a story about a young couple, happily married, just now thinking of children. They both are fairly inexperienced, conservative, but have a good vanilla sex life.
The story starts in media res, and jumps immediately to the back story
hubby works outsiide the home, wife has a home based business.
lately, they have been having morning sex before hubby goes to work, to try to get her preggers. She finds this just leaves her horny, so she often sits in her robe and finshes herself off while reading the daily New stories on Literotica, a website she has never shared with hubby.
One morning, just after hubby leaves, the doorbell rings. She figures it might be a courier, or that busy body neighbour. She briefly considers accidentally leaving her robe open, but one delivery gal is very butch, not her taste at all, and that neighbour would be ffended, so she leaves it closed.
turns out its hubby at the door, he forgot his office and house keys ("dang these newfangled car keys that don't fit on key rings"). he thinks he left them next to the computer.
whooops!
he sprints upstairs before she can close the browser.
Turns out he too has developed a secret Lit habit, late at night when she thinks he's checking late night sports scores. He is actually relieved they have this in common.
Which brings the story back to the opening line.
What do YOU think she's reading? where does the story go?
who wants to write it?
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