What am I doing wrong?

[Sad Man]

I have a couple of stories:

A Party To Remember & Kaitlins Revenge

but I don't get any threads submitted by other people. I try to add as much as I can but I don't want the story to be all mine, I want it to take paths I wouldn't normally think of.
Can anyone give my some advice on how to make my stories better so I will get more replies? Thanks in advance,
Sad Man.

 

[SlidingInSilk]

posting here usually helps.

 

[bungakawa2000]

Well, I can tell you what I liked and what I didn't like about your stories. But keep in mind this is all about personnal taste!

First off, congratulations on putting some meat around the bone (no very bad sexual joke intended). I like the fact you tried to develop a story and not simply "talk about sex". Your characters' personality aren't set in stone, and that is a big + in my book.

Now, the things I don't like: well, first I'm not very much interested in Incest stories. But that is just me, as it seems to be a very popular genre. Second, I'm a little (lot) put-off by the fact both of your heroines break into tears right at the start of the story. I don't like to see characters being hurt, especially in their feelings. Maybe am I just a demi-perv, but waddyawant. That must be why I prefer stories about toons or totally wacked characters: they can live through pretty awful situations without bearing a scar for the rest of their lives.

Finally, I'd tell you not to give up. I have many stories to my name, and only a few of them got enough threads from other people to really call them "interactive"!

Best of luck!

Bunga

 

[Sad Man]

Thanks for your help, I'll definately take it all into consideration.