what about this idea

musicankane

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A kind of prostitute type service except it's a company called "Womb donors" and what they do is provide lonely guys, (such as computer geeks and guys that may have been injured in some way) basicly guys that would have a very difficult time finding a wife but want kids. So they pay this service to send them a woman who would fuck them until Pregnant and stay with them until the baby is born and then be off.

I came up with a rough idea of having the story tell of a woman appling for a job with "Womb Donors".

I don't know though, the more i think about it the more it sounds to unbelievable and therefore probably wouldn't turn out right.
 
Well, assuming you wanted to be really exploitive about the whole thing, you could put this story in the context of human smuggling; these women are from the third world, and in exchange for offering their womb, earn their freedom after giving birth.

The question is, is the main male character a nice guy or a sleaze? If he's nice, perhaps he is ignorant of where these womb doners come from and what their situation is, and only learns of these dire facts as time goes on. That slant may only work well if the story is told from the male characters perspective, though.

Telling it from the woman's perspective, you have a lot of options -the despiration of her situation in her home country (perhaps her parents or husband has died as well), her desire for a better life, and the struggle with herself to give in to these unsavory men who offer her this deal, and then her time spend with a stranger being fucked and impregnated by him.
 
Maybe the compny are really corrupt, and they tell the men that the women are not wives, so they only visit at their fertile time, say one week a month. Then they use the same woman to service three customers at a time.

The detail of what happens when the woman gets pregnant is a bit vague in my mind, but a substitute woman is provided for the two unlucky men. That way only one third the number of women is needed.

A twist ending would be if a white/black man has such a deal and is told his woman is pregnant - she visits regularly until the !!!black/white!!! baby is born and he knows it isn't really his.
 
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