TheEarl
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I got several feedbacks today, which included these gems:
Well said.
I laughed.
Short and sweet, but very much appreciated.
An interesting story, but it never exactly took off. That is to say, while certainly informative it wasn't really all that erotic. I suggest in the future you try harder at developing a plot and use less instructive language. I think you have the potential to write excellent erotica, but only if you focus more on establishing a storyline, capice?
The second one's the really interesting one. Especially considering that the story in question was a How To on writing sex scenes. The language is intelligent, which suggests that this is someone taking the piss, but I have learned never to underestimate the resources of the truly stupid. This person could be serious.
Scary.
The Earl
Well said.
I laughed.
Short and sweet, but very much appreciated.
An interesting story, but it never exactly took off. That is to say, while certainly informative it wasn't really all that erotic. I suggest in the future you try harder at developing a plot and use less instructive language. I think you have the potential to write excellent erotica, but only if you focus more on establishing a storyline, capice?
The second one's the really interesting one. Especially considering that the story in question was a How To on writing sex scenes. The language is intelligent, which suggests that this is someone taking the piss, but I have learned never to underestimate the resources of the truly stupid. This person could be serious.
Scary.
The Earl