Weird idea

[Primus]

I had this idea for a non-human story. It is a woman who gets possessed by a sex demon and starts to change. When she is normally a sort of fridged person, she turns into a sorta nymphomaniac. Her changes are also physicial, such as her normal smallish breasts start to grow like crazy to the point that her clothes rip off by themselves when she tries to wear them. Anyway, that is my idea, I got nothing for an ending. But hey, your gonna be writting this so what do I care? I hope someone will write this story and I look forward to it.

 

[Cockatoo]

Sounds sort of, but not quite, like one I did about two months ago. It's not especially happy and horny, but... well, have a look:

Cold Hands

 

[Guest]

I like the idea of having a woman being possessed by a Demon and going through emotional/mental changes. (I don't care so much for the "Sci-Fi twist" of her body physically changing, though.)

Would a Succubus, perhaps, possess the body of a human woman so she could experience sex in a true physical form? Perhaps the Demoness craves and longs to really feel what it's like!

 

[Lovelynice]

Well, I like the changing bit a lot. I don't think it's sci-fi, it's complete fantasy...which is a pity. Not being so wonderful in form, I'd enjoy that part of the concept.

From other stories I've seen, I don't think you need any reason at all for why the sex-demon is doing this. That's just a pedantic useless detail...it's what the woman thinks about this which is really important.

As for clothes bursting...I've always been into the slow build-up. Sudden stuff isn't so fun to me, and the slow way is sneaky. I wouldn't even mention the sex-demon, but only give a few hints as the story goes along....nicely disturbing hints.

 

[peterpan]

I like the idea of having a woman being possessed by a Demon and going through emotional/mental changes. (I don't care so much for the "Sci-Fi twist" of her body physically changing, though.)

Would a Succubus, perhaps, possess the body of a human woman so she could experience sex in a true physical form? Perhaps the Demoness craves and longs to really feel what it's like!

[indignant]Wot you got against SF? we aint all unejucated literites![/indignant]

Also, how can someone cry sperm tears? I once saw this TV program where this guy sucked milk up his nose and... never mind.

Anyway.

This tale does sound familiar. Pity the story seach engine does not seem to be working

 

[glock800]

Also, how can someone cry sperm tears? I once saw this TV program where this guy sucked milk up his nose and... never mind.

lol i saw that program also

 

[Guest]

Wot you got against SF? we aint all unejucated literites

I never said I had anything against Sci-Fi. I just don't like the idea of the woman's body changing physically in this story. That's all.

 

[peterpan]

I never said I had anything against Sci-Fi. I just don't like the idea of the woman's body changing physically in this story. That's all.

I notice that is two silly responses I have thrown your way.

I actually liked your succubus idea. One take on this could be that the succubus does not know how a real woman feels, as they only become mens fantasies of how a woman should be. Thus every sensation could be described as if for the first time. Also, there could be some interesting interaction with the bodies actual owner. Perhaps she agreed to give the Succubus a spin in her body in return for help in seducing some man she was to shy to approach...

 

[Chicklet]

I just don't like the idea of the woman's body changing physically in this story.

I don't either.

Keep it simple, keep it a mental thing - her body isn't physically changing, but because of her new attitude, it's going to appear different to men. The way she walks, the way she moves her hips, the hunger in her eyes when she looks upon the men.

The woman in question could have a neighbor, or a friend, who has been basically platonic over the years they've known each other. He thinks of her as asexual, basically, because she's so plain. She's not bad looking, just, bland in general. When she's possessed, she starts taking on a strange appearance, the way her eyes follow him across the room, the way her chest heaves with each simple breath. Things he's never noticed about his friend are coming to light, and, god help him, he can't get her out of his mind.

Interesting twist might be to write this from the POV of the man, or another observer of sorts. We (the readers) wouldn't know what was going on with her until the end. We would be drawn a picture of her as a plain jane, so to speak, and she's turning into a seductress.

Chicklet

 

[Chicklet]

Perhaps she agreed to give the Succubus a spin in her body in return for help in seducing some man she was to shy to approach...

nice idea. makes it believable. like a pact with the devil but less so.

 

[Guest]

One take on this could be that the succubus does not know how a real woman feels, as they only become mens fantasies of how a woman should be. Thus every sensation could be described as if for the first time.

Exactly!

Also, there could be some interesting interaction with the bodies actual owner. Perhaps she agreed to give the Succubus a spin in her body in return for help in seducing some man she was to shy to approach...

This is cool, too.

 

[Guest]

The woman in question could have a neighbor, or a friend, who has been basically platonic over the years they've known each other. He thinks of her as asexual, basically, because she's so plain. She's not bad looking, just, bland in general. When she's possessed, she starts taking on a strange appearance, the way her eyes follow him across the room, the way her chest heaves with each simple breath. Things he's never noticed about his friend are coming to light, and, god help him, he can't get her out of his mind.

Bingo!

 

[NASCARaddicted]

gotta say, I am too tired right now to read the whole thread ...

but the basic plot: a person is possessed by a demon and has sex ..... just remember the movie "Ghostbusters".

Rick Moranis and Sigourney Weaver both where possessed by demons. This demons wanted to mate, so they started searching for each other .....

In the Ghostbusters movie, Rick Moranis run around the streets and saying stuff like "I am they Key-Master, are you the Gate-Keeper ?"

So what about this: The demons want to mate. So they have to find each other. They both possess a body of someone and run around and search for the partner. But instead of asking other people, they have sex with them, so they can find out if the other is also a demon or not ....

 

[Chicklet]

they didn't want to mate, they wanted to open up a gate to hell...

but yes I remember ms weaver floating over the bed, her body writhing in very unattractive sexual ways, while bill murray looked on

 

[Screaming Grace]

Sigourney Weaver was possessed by demons. This demons wanted to mate, well as I remeber at the time of the fillm didn't every one want to mate with her.

Scream