Was told to come here

[Dar~]

I have 6 poems in need of rvc's I would so appreciate any and all comments and feedback. I wish to improve.
Thank you

 

[My Erotic Tale]

I have 6 poems in need of rvc's I would so appreciate any and all comments and feedback. I wish to improve.
Thank you

<smile> Howdy!!
some post the poem they want ...criticism on here
or a link like your signature and some one usually
will give feedback and comment can't promise a vote.
But I'll take a 'peek'