Wanting to heat things up...

[angelicminx]

Taking Laurel's suggestion and asking for feedback. I would love to know what people think of what I have written and where I can improve. I do have other stories I am working on. They have gone to edit and I expect to submit them soon.

All of my work is in my signature. Thanks in advance for taking the time!

 

[whiteboy]

Hmm your stuff is well written I'll give you that. Try and get into utilizing other point of views besides first person and actually give the characters some names. So far from what I've read you do got some decent talent though!

 

[angelicminx]

Hmm your stuff is well written I'll give you that. Try and get into utilizing other point of views besides first person and actually give the characters some names. So far from what I've read you do got some decent talent though!

Thank you very much! I am working on several stories in 3rd person.

 

[blackpenblueink]

Liked the Lovely day for a ride

My lover fantasizes about a cock in both holes, so it was exciting for me to read it.