Want a bigger dick, boys and girls?

[brianshead]

Take a look at my story, "Lab Rat." http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=294297 After you do please give me some back! Brian

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Ok... I have a SPAM on rye, please.

 

[markybaby73]

mmm..spam is tasty on rye but I prefer it on punkernickle bread...LOL. Whats the matter jenny you dont like soft meat?

 

[brianshead]

Maybe not

Maybe I don't want anyone to read it. Someone read it and thoroughly trashed it --apparently, it dropped from near 4.30 to 4.17 on one vote. This is a tough crowd.

 

[DonFox]

Don't let criticism discourage you. I'm about to read your story now, and I'll post my thoughts shortly. I always try to be constructive and detailed when I comment - something that, unfortunately, some readers will not bother to do.

 

[DonFox]

I posted a comment, Brian. I was honest, but my intent wasn't to trash your story at all. You've got a solid premise. It just needs tweaked to reach its full potential.

 

[brianshead]

Appreciated

Thanks for the comments. I do appreciate it. Brian