waking up next to...?

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simple way to start a story that can go maany ways.

The person the protagonist wakes up next to can be anybody inappropriate:

~ family member
~boss
~stranger
~co-worker
~ex-spouse
~person of "wrong" gender or race
~ much older
~ much younger (e.g. but not limited to kid's friend)
~a unicorn
~the cop investigating the murder
~an alien
~ a scary clown
~a celebrity
~others limited only by the writer's imagination

The drama in the story comes from the questions:

How did we end up here?
Where do we go from here?
 
Yes. Waking up to discover a strange (or semi-strange, as in unexpected) girl in my bed is one of my recurring go-to fantasies. More often than not she too has little idea how she ended up there, or at least isn't confessing.
 
For weeks I've been playing around with another HR story idea in my head, the new young nerdy employee wakes up next to the sexy MILF head of HR after the Christmas party.
 
simple way to start a story that can go maany ways.

The person the protagonist wakes up next to can be anybody inappropriate:

~ family member
~boss
~stranger
~co-worker
~ex-spouse
~person of "wrong" gender or race
~ much older
~ much younger (e.g. but not limited to kid's friend)
~a unicorn
~the cop investigating the murder
~an alien
~ a scary clown
~a celebrity
~others limited only by the writer's imagination

The drama in the story comes from the questions:

How did we end up here?
Where do we go from here?

I would say same gender or different race, not wrong. I get your intent though, all good.
 
simple way to start a story that can go maany ways.

The person the protagonist wakes up next to can be anybody inappropriate:

~ family member
~boss
~stranger
~co-worker
~ex-spouse
~person of "wrong" gender or race
~ much older
~ much younger (e.g. but not limited to kid's friend)
~a unicorn
~the cop investigating the murder
~an alien
~ a scary clown
~a celebrity
~others limited only by the writer's imagination

The drama in the story comes from the questions:

How did we end up here?
Where do we go from here?

Yeah, I'm working on one of these now. Not going to give it away though.
 
After the wedding reception next to the bride and groom? How did that happen? Too many libations? Are they swingers?
 
Lets push this a bit...

Scientist and his/her experiment. Engineer and his/her prototype.
 
random people with no prior connection, thrown into a dungeon like existence where they are fed only after sex... Kinky version of Philip K Dick's "I Have No Mouth, But I Must Scream" perhaps, make it as dark as you want. Or as light!

There was (maybe still is) a kinky little noncon story about a guy kidnapping a woman and putting her in a dungeon. He then (through tons of money, tech, and bug-free programming) joins her in the dungeon playing as if he were also abducted. That may play in a similar way... Or not. Your story, your call, 'course.
 
True story here.

Went to a big party in a huge house in Magnolia. That's a part of Seattle. A friend drove to the party but she had to leave as soon as she got there because her kid was sick. I stayed because one of my coworkers was there and she said she'd give me ride home.

As the party wound down, she was nowhere to be seen. Actually never saw her again as she'd completed her last day at work. I didn't really know her. But I digress.

One of the guys who lived there said he had use of a car and could give me a ride the following day. Pointed to a couch and told me to crash there.

Ken, a mutual friend who got weirded out easily, had a little too much to drink and went to sleep on another couch in the other room. His couch made out into a bed.

Before Ken woke up, I undid the fly of my jeans, lifted up my shirt and got under the covers with him. Poor guy freaked when he woke up!
 
True story here.

Went to a big party in a huge house in Magnolia. That's a part of Seattle. A friend drove to the party but she had to leave as soon as she got there because her kid was sick. I stayed because one of my coworkers was there and she said she'd give me ride home.

As the party wound down, she was nowhere to be seen. Actually never saw her again as she'd completed her last day at work. I didn't really know her. But I digress.

One of the guys who lived there said he had use of a car and could give me a ride the following day. Pointed to a couch and told me to crash there.

Ken, a mutual friend who got weirded out easily, had a little too much to drink and went to sleep on another couch in the other room. His couch made out into a bed.

Before Ken woke up, I undid the fly of my jeans, lifted up my shirt and got under the covers with him. Poor guy freaked when he woke up!

LOL, now there's a story you should be writing. :D Had a good laugh about it though.
 
My story "You Have To Go To Mass, Part 4" starts with Father Flannigan waking up next to a naked woman who looks exactly like his late wife.... who turns out to be his daughter. It only gets weirder from there.....
 
The boss's kid.
The pastor/preacher/rabbi's kid, in the religious guy's house, with said kid (18+) in some sexual action with you while you were sleeping.
The person you actually hate most, with both of you naked and spooning.
 
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