Votes and Feedback

[sweetnpetite]

I'm *begging* anybody who reads this forum to read my peoms, give them a vote (any vote) and send feedback if you'd like.

None of them are great literature or anything, but they are short and readable. I promise that it won't take long

The most votes i have for any poem is 11. I have gotten some feedback, but only a little, and only on about 2 of my poems. The only thing doing worse is my Letters and Poems enty with 2 votes Oh well...

I know poetry doesn't as a rule get read much, but I would really appreciate any extra attention my poor neglected poems could get.

All that JAZ- non-erotic (8 lines)

Down on my knees- erotic

Have sex with me- erotic

Lips Part- erotic

Mothers and Sons- Non-Erotic

Your Fantasy- Erotic

Give it a try You've got nothing to lose. Thanks in advance.

 

[Angeline]

Hiya sweet! It's very late for me, so I'll have a look at your poems tomorrow. But, yes, the numbers you report sound about right to me for poems. Even the most wildly popular ones get nowhere near the attention a story does.

And I took the quiz and, omigosh it's right. Hahaha.

 

[HomerPindar]

And I took the quiz and, omigosh it's right. Hahaha.

Ok, so out with it, what sexy cartoon character are you? Inquiring minds wanna know

HomerPindar

 

[Angeline]

Ok, so out with it, what sexy cartoon character are you? Inquiring minds wanna know

HomerPindar

Uh ok.

Betty Boop.

"You're the girl next door with a naughty side.
Sweet and wholesome, you sometimes let your
sexy side slip."

I would never say boop boop a doop. It sounds, erm, boop boop a stupid. But otherwise, it was an amazingly accurate reading, lol. I wanna see who Lauren is.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

http://live.quizilla.com/user_images/M/Medox/1040029117_ktoptinker.gif

 

[Maria2394]

http://quizilla.com/cgi-bin/result/result.pl


woo hoo!! I'm tinker bell too

 

[Angeline]

Listen you smartasses. Betty Boop can go straight on till morning too. She just doesn't put it in her avatar. Hmmmph.

 

[Guest]

I'm *begging* anybody who reads this forum to read my peoms, give them a vote (any vote) and send feedback if you'd like.

I'll be reading them and reporting back as soon as I can.



This is too funny......

http://live.quizilla.com/user_images/M/Medox/1040029079_ktopdaphne.gif

 

[Maria2394]

Listen you smartasses. Betty Boop can go straight on till morning too. She just doesn't put it in her avatar. Hmmmph.

Tinkerbell sprinkles sparkles of calming powder (bartered from some happnin' elves outside magical Emerald City) on Betty Boop

Oh, Betty, I have no doubt, you can go straight through till morning, it's tattooed on your butt, right? no need for blatant display in an avatar

Girl, I read your Pyewacket Days, ( it was HOT without all the gratuitious little sex words) I bet you can go longer than the energizer bunny on meth!!!

think I'll go harass Captain Crunch...lol
and read sweet n petite's poems

 

[Angeline]

Oh, Betty, I have no doubt, you can go straight through till morning, it's tattooed on your butt, right? no need for blatant display in an avatar

Nope. No tatts. One piercing in each ear. I'm telling you, it's accurate.

Anyway, Tess got the best one cause it's there, you read it, and you still don't know.

P.S. In spite of appearances to the contrary, as evidenced by this incredible thread hijack sweet, I read, voted, and fedback.


LMAO!!! The energizer bunny on meth???? Well no. Not quite *that* energetic.

 

[HomerPindar]

I'm so glad I asked

 

[Angeline]

I'm so glad I asked

I wish I could say that makes two of us, lol. But you know, Homer, the criterion by which I judge how much I embarrass myself in a thread is that Rowdy Ted extravaganza. This is small potatoes by comparison.

Anyway, this is your fault. You know, like everything.

 

[HomerPindar]

I wish I could say that makes two of us, lol. But you know, Homer, the criterion by which I judge how much I embarrass myself in a thread is that Rowdy Ted extravaganza. This is small potatoes by comparison.

Anyway, this is your fault. You know, like everything.

But of course it is - I even took credit for the lunar eclipse last night...

HomerPindar

 

[Angeline]

But of course it is - I even took credit for the lunar eclipse last night...

HomerPindar

Really? Oh. Well, in that case, thanks.

 

[WickedEve]

I'm betty boop, too.
Has anyone read sweet's poems?
Is there a link?
What's happening on the board? I've been away too much.
If you saw my post about my sneezing injury -- well, now I have to see a surgeon. Maybe I can get a laptop for the hospital...

 

[sweetnpetite]

Seeing the descriptions of the cartoon babes, I think I could be any one of them. But I like jesica rabit cuz
1 she has red hair
2 she has a red dress
3 she has dangerous curves
4 she says "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way."
4 she has a sexy voice
5 she sings sultry retro bluesy songs

so I'll stick with her for now

Thanks for all the feedback. I *will* send personal responses. I promise

I don't have a poem link, just follow the link in my sig line to my page

sweetnsalty

 

[denis hale]

Hey

Fiona Apple
would make a sexy
cartoon character.

I'll check out your stuff.
No doubt.

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[The_Fool]

I'm betty boop, too.
Has anyone read sweet's poems?
Is there a link?
What's happening on the board? I've been away too much.
If you saw my post about my sneezing injury -- well, now I have to see a surgeon. Maybe I can get a laptop for the hospital...

OUCH!!! You hurry up and get better...

 

[Guest]

OUCH!!! You hurry up and get better...

The same from me WE.

I did my bit for s 'n p. Hope we're still talking.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Of course we are. I've just been completely lazy about replying to any feedback. Sorry.

I love your av, it's beautiful. That face looks familiar. I'll let you know when I put my finger on it.

 

[Linbido]

I love your av, it's beautiful. That face looks familiar. I'll let you know when I put my finger on it.

First time I saw it I thought Melanie Lynskey, but now I'm not that sure...

 

[ExistentialLuv]

Linbido

Thanx for the feedback on my poems. Glade you like Circle

What was it you found dull about the other's? Just the subject in general?

Once again thanx

 

[Linbido]

Linbido

Thanx for the feedback on my poems. Glade you like Circle

What was it you found dull about the other's? Just the subject in general?

Once again thanx

Taking the reply over to your thread.

-Lin