Volunteer Editor's

[AirSearch1]

Please help.

I have tried to submit my 1st story twice so far and both times it was rejected. Is there anyone out there that would be willing to take a look at my story and edit it for me.

If there is someone willing to help me, please PM me to get in touch.

Thank you, AirSearch1

 

[Weird Harold]

I have tried to submit my 1st story twice so far and both times it was rejected. Is there anyone out there that would be willing to take a look at my story and edit it for me.

Why was your story rejected?

What category is your story in/What is it about?

Taking on a twice rejected story without knowing something about it is probably more than most editors want to deal with.

 

[AirSearch1]

Re: Re: Volunteer Editor's

Why was your story rejected?

What category is your story in/What is it about?
I tried to post it in the incest category---it's about a brother and sister where the sister asks her brother to teach here about love making.

If you would like, I can send you a copy to look at.


Taking on a twice rejected story without knowing something about it is probably more than most editors want to deal with.

The 1st time it was rejected was because of an underaged character and I fixed that problem.

The second time I checked and this is the message that I got.
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Dear Writer,

Thank you for your submission to Literotica. We appreciate the time and effort you've taken to write a story and submit it to our site. However, we've found that we cannot post your submission in its current form. The checklist below may help you in re-examining your manuscript.


[Please break up your dialogue. The convention is one speaker per paragraph, so whenever someone new says something, just add a paragraph. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the paragraph formatting of dialogue if you have further questions. ]

 

[Weird Harold]

You have a PM.