Vocabulary Issues (Maybe)

[BelleCanzuto]

Truly wrote:

It is specifically against the rules here to post over three paragraphs of a story, and any parts of rejected stories or stories that have been taken down (otherwise I would have just posted the entire story here).

Several posters have offered to review the story for you. You can connect with them via private message (make sure you've turned on your ability to send and receive PMs in the settings for this forum). You can send a fellow author your story, and they can review it and give you feedback.

Many of us have done this for each other. Send a PM, and you'll get some help.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Truly wrote:

Several posters have offered to review the story for you. You can connect with them via private message (make sure you've turned on your ability to send and receive PMs in the settings for this forum). You can send a fellow author your story, and they can review it and give you feedback.

Many of us have done this for each other. Send a PM, and you'll get some help.

I can vouch for that. Thanks again, Belle!