PinkIris
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- Joined
- Mar 25, 2011
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I've been reading here for quite some time and once upon a time in my past youth I wanted to be a writer and thus I have finally gotten brave enough to write. I went with the standard "write what you know" and so my story is very loosely based on where I grew up. I've had one person in real life read it and he found it surprisingly good. But... he's a friend and could just be saying that too.
It's a story that could actually be a never-ending series and I've found that I'm already itching to continue the line. There is M-F, F-F and F-F-M in this first one and if I do continue the line, this same mix and match will apply. I guess I'd label it "erotic couplings" even though there is same sex and multiples. The story runs as a head female leaves her position at work but wants to "take care" of some attitudes of other people first.
Umm... not sure how much info to put here. It's roughly 5800 words. I worried that was too long but I just can't shrink it anymore. Making my stories too long has always been a problem of mine. I need someone that will be brutally honest and yet not set out to rip me to shreds. I don't THINK my spelling and grammer are off, I've done multiple spell checks and such. My main worry is making sure my characters are "real" and the story flows okay. Because of the length I've cut so much out that I'm concerned I cut out too much.
Like I said, I'm a virgin to this, so I have no idea really what to do now. PM me if you can help.
It's a story that could actually be a never-ending series and I've found that I'm already itching to continue the line. There is M-F, F-F and F-F-M in this first one and if I do continue the line, this same mix and match will apply. I guess I'd label it "erotic couplings" even though there is same sex and multiples. The story runs as a head female leaves her position at work but wants to "take care" of some attitudes of other people first.
Umm... not sure how much info to put here. It's roughly 5800 words. I worried that was too long but I just can't shrink it anymore. Making my stories too long has always been a problem of mine. I need someone that will be brutally honest and yet not set out to rip me to shreds. I don't THINK my spelling and grammer are off, I've done multiple spell checks and such. My main worry is making sure my characters are "real" and the story flows okay. Because of the length I've cut so much out that I'm concerned I cut out too much.
Like I said, I'm a virgin to this, so I have no idea really what to do now. PM me if you can help.
