Very grateful for celebrity correction

[AchtungNight]

Thank you to the Literotica fan who told me Najwa Karam was not Muslim. I apologize for this mistake and have inserted my second choice into "Debrief" in Najwa's role. The story works far better now, I believe, now that it is altered. Enjoy readers! See, I can be taught.

The new version of "Debrief" should be up on Lit soon. Only Clarke's lover is changed to Deeyah, the rest is the same.

Thanks again, anonymous.

 

[JackLuis]

Thank you to the Literotica fan who told me Najwa Karam was not Muslim. I apologize for this mistake and have inserted my second choice into "Debrief" in Najwa's role. The story works far better now, I believe, now that it is altered. Enjoy readers! See, I can be taught.

The new version of "Debrief" should be up on Lit soon. Only Clarke's lover is changed to Deeyah, the rest is the same.

Thanks again, anonymous.

AN:
Isn't it nice when the readers answer or correct a point in the story?

I put a plea in the footer of my last chapter of Spreading Seeds and have been geting a good amount of feedback.

Keep up the good work!

Jack

 

[AchtungNight]

There is no excuse for poor research. I'm glad I was able to fix it. I will definitely mention this event if I ever write my primer on "How To Do Celebrity Fantasies" and I will work not to repeat my mistake.