Vermilion's Writing...

[Vermilion]

Following Slyc_Willie's example I have decided to start a thread dedicated to personal advertisement...

My most recent work I advertised in the new stories thread, but just to reiterate...
A La recherche Du Temps Perdu in the Romance category...

New works in the offing any time.

I'd also really like some feedback on the first chapter of my novella
For Love Or Money Ch.01 which has been up since August and had 7 votes <rolls eyes>

Thank you all!
xxx
V

 

[Vermilion]

Yay - three new stories accepted in the last three days!
Feedback please

Three new stories, all under 1,000 words so it won't take long to read them

Please read, vote and PC - I'm desperately trying to improve my writing and some useful critical commentary would really help

Reviews/Essays - Looking Back

Erotic Couplings - Love 15

Fetish - A Little Of What You Fancy (this is actually 15 very short stories each on a different topic... not all fetishistic)

Thanks all!
x
V

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Loved your Proustian romance. As everyone has told you, you write really well, and I enjoy reading you.

One thing on etiquette here. If you ask for attention you are, noblesse oblige, expected to do your bit in reading other stories. Try jomar first, who gave a nice PC.

We are a bit of a self-help group here who try to encourage each other. Welcome to the club.

 

[Vermilion]

Loved your Proustian romance. As everyone has told you, you write really well, and I enjoy reading you.

One thing on etiquette here. If you ask for attention you are, noblesse oblige, expected to do your bit in reading other stories. Try jomar first, who gave a nice PC.

We are a bit of a self-help group here who try to encourage each other. Welcome to the club.

Oh I do read and vote but I tend to feedback/PM people whose stories really get me one way or another I get nervous doing PCs, dunno why Don;t worry Elfin, I;m polite.
x
V

 

[jomar]

I read for Love or Money, left a pc and voted.

 

[kandie]

Following Slyc_Willie's example I have decided to start a thread dedicated to personal advertisement...

I thought about posting an advertisement like this, but decided I would do best to work on my writing skills, then later on maybe. I have had two years of hell and it really affected my writing, but I write anyways at is relieves stress, inspires me and is down right fun.

I don’t question the fact that I have the talent for writing, but do push myself to be the best I can be. I now have a new hubby WHOOOHOOO-oh I couldn’t help myself here….LOL! But he is not that good of an editor and was doing more harm then good, so I decided he could proof read my stories.

AsylumKeeper will be my editor and only he will be allowed to cut-chop my stories. I know I will do better in the long run. I have also started reading other authors work and love the diversity of skills seen here on Lit.

I have rewritten Ami all three parts, two posted and awaiting part 3. I also rewrote His Angel, but did not have an editor yet, its better then it was as the first one made me want to throw up on my shoes.

I like your stories too and thanks for reading my 2 cents worth. HUGS!

 

[kandie]

OOOPs I almost forgot "His Angel" is a true story and my first Novellas.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I love all you stuff, V. You are one of the writers I look for daily in the new postings.