vampires

[Dennis13]

for some reason I've been having the urge to watch and read stories about vampires lately and I want to try and write one too.

Can I please get some hints from people who have posted and read good stories in this vein? (nice pun huh?)

I was thinking a relatively short one with the start of:

Running. Why do they always run so? Even those that don't believe in my kind should be able to remember enough of the stories that they wont get away. It's not like there's anywhere for them to go, except into my arms. Maybe if they knew what pleasure I could give them they wouldn't, and maybe I'll accidentally walk into a stake too!
I've heard of others finding matches in their prey. Maybe I'll find mine soon too. God knows I've waited long enough. I guess I'll just have to enjoy my time as much as possible until then. Being sure to spread the fun too of course.


Wow! That just flowed out. Maybe I should pause writing my other story and give this one a shot. Anyways, any help would be appreciated.

 

[Clea]

Yeah, it's a good concept certainly, but hard to lead in to, I've tried and failed because I attempt to write realisticly, but vampires require a certain level of fantasy, but then I tried it with a story about a goth girl, whist trying to avoid any sterotypes, I think prehaps a fantastical setting, such as medieval royalty or such would lend itself alot better than modern nights

 

[Sshafer]

Vampire

Its pretty easy to write about vampires. Stoker wrote they could go out in sun light for a short time but it was not the faveort time. night was it was easier for them to hunt for victoms. I written a book about a vimpire famly that live in nappa valley and rasies grapes for wine. Every body know what they are and likes them. They live on blood wine. I made them act as anybody ealse. I wrote a story for Lit called a vampires night out. Read it , it might help you to get started.

 

[doormouse]

I love erotic horror.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=150437

That is my fave one on here. Sorry, haven't read yours Ss, I don't think.

I'm slowly getting through the top lists

The story in the link starts very much like you want yours to.

Have a read. The author did a brilliant job.

 

[sirhugs]

I think Josh Wheddon had it right...the charm is the fascination of the girl with the virility.

One analysis of vamp tales is they are deflowering metaphors. Another is they represent the 'evil' of menstration.

Things you needto decide:

~is she food, or wil he sire her?
~will she submit willingly?
~do they breed lil baby vampires? (lol)

 

[Dennis13]

Things you needto decide:

~do they breed lil baby vampires? (lol) [/B]

Whenever I've read a story on this site with a vampire cumming, I've always wondered what the result would really be.(and would the cum look normal?)

 

[Dennis13]

hey doormouse,
don't worry about reading my stories yet, I'm still trying to write my first one. doing it longhand(no comp) so it's hard to judge the length of the story until I type it.
eventually I'll have it done and posted(so many more steps yet)

 

[hotchkiss]

I love Vampiric stories and have posted a few of my own on lit though I've had to fiddle with one or two to get them accepted.

I have reams of tales about a character I dreamt up called Raven, though not strictly a vampire in the normal sense of the word she feeds on blood and emotional energies.

I don't know how to put a link in but feel free to read and comment on my scrawls if you wish. Just search in the stories section for author "hotchkiss"

Hope this inspires you

HK

 

[Clare Quilty]

I think Josh Wheddon had it right...the charm is the fascination of the girl with the virility.

One analysis of vamp tales is they are deflowering metaphors. Another is they represent the 'evil' of menstration.

Things you needto decide:

~is she food, or wil he sire her?
~will she submit willingly?
~do they breed lil baby vampires? (lol)

How does this reflect upon stories about female vampires? The male vampire genre (count so and so etc...) doesn't interest me in the least. Female vampires (and Succubi), however, do it for me in a big way--I blame Vampirella.

 

[Fitzdraco]

Off the top of my head, something I haven't seen before. Some vampire stories have it that everyone who is bitten will rise as a vampire. It's an odd concept that the act of eating provides more compitition for food.

Vampires are always presented in small numbers. But considering how hard the average vampire is to kill this seems odd as well. Considering all the advantages vampires have, plus there method of reproduction, it becomes a biological pyramid scheme.

Of course most stories that feature this type of vampire put checks in place, either social rules among vampires or the valliant vampire hunter keeping numbers in check.

Now for the novel idea. Vampires exist under the bitten will rise rule. There are no hunters to keep them in check or the rules are ignored. This would leave a large population of vampires with very little food. Humans while not being extinct are rare and valuble. Also the normal biological check of starving to death when there is no food would not help vampires as they are immortal.

 

[Shendude]

Now for the novel idea. Vampires exist under the bitten will rise rule. There are no hunters to keep them in check or the rules are ignored. This would leave a large population of vampires with very little food. Humans while not being extinct are rare and valuble. Also the normal biological check of starving to death when there is no food would not help vampires as they are immortal.

Interesting. My reason for why Vampires are so small in number is that not only can they feed on each other, they prefer it.

Thus, they're numbers are kept in check by rampant cannibalism.

 

[Match Made In Heaven]

Interesting. My reason for why Vampires are so small in number is that not only can they feed on each other, they prefer it.

Thus, they're numbers are kept in check by rampant cannibalism.

now that's sexy!

 

[Dennis13]

reminds me of an old joke I once heard:

What's the ultimate in courage?
Two cannibals in a 69.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Whenever I've read a story on this site with a vampire cumming, I've always wondered what the result would really be.(and would the cum look normal?)

I don't think a vampire should cum. That's what a human would do. For me, it's not what's sexy about a vampire. He should find his release (or give it) in other ways, befiting his character and status.

I'd love to read some erotic vampire tales that don't involve the vampire 'cumming' Does anyone know of any on this site?

Does anyone else feel this way, or is it just me?

PS- Interview w/ a Vampire doesn't have any sex scenes that I remember, yet was highly erotic, as was the film version of Bram Stoker's Drakula (did have sexual situations, but no intercourse that I remember.)

 

[sweetnpetite]

I think Josh Wheddon had it right...the charm is the fascination of the girl with the virility.

One analysis of vamp tales is they are deflowering metaphors. Another is they represent the 'evil' of menstration.

others:

penatration (fangs into neck)
draining of life force (blood/semen)
impalement
religious symbolism ties with oppresing the pleasures of the flesh
blood lust/ carnal desires
canibalism
animal instincts
strength, power, superiority, and dominance
nonconcent/reluctance often leading to surrender

 

[Shendude]

Incidentally, I've never understood the erotic appeal of the Vampire. I mean, what's erotic about being eaten? And Vampires are animated corpses. They're like glorified zombies. Hell, the Chinese variant even has poisonously bad breath.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Incidentally, I've never understood the erotic appeal of the Vampire. I mean, what's erotic about being eaten? And Vampires are animated corpses. They're like glorified zombies. Hell, the Chinese variant even has poisonously bad breath.

as I said:

penatration (fangs into neck)
draining of life force (blood/semen)
impalement
religious symbolism ties with oppresing the pleasures (sins) of the flesh
blood lust/ carnal desires
canibalism
animal instincts
strength, power, superiority, and dominance
nonconcent/reluctance often leading to surrender

 

[sweetnpetite]

One analysis of vamp tales is they are deflowering metaphors. Another is they represent the 'evil' of menstration.

i was thinking about this when I watched the first evil dead. The woman all flip out (extreme PMS) and become posessed, then end up splattering their blood all over the men. Neither of the men become posessed. The females present are Ash's sister, his girlfriend and I'm not sure who the third one was- just a friend?

I did see the movie as a reflection of men's fear and disgust of menstral blood and fear of woman and their out of control emotions. (from their pont of view) But maybe it was just me being oversenstive in my feminist perspective again?

 

[sirhugs]

Incidentally, I've never understood the erotic appeal of the Vampire. I mean, what's erotic about being eaten? And Vampires are animated corpses. They're like glorified zombies. Hell, the Chinese variant even has poisonously bad breath.

"what's erotic about being eaten? "

I can't believe you wrote that!

or maybe you didn't see the double entendre

 

[Dennis13]

hey sweetnpetite

if you're looking for a vamp movie with really erotic scenes try to find Wes Craven's Dracula 2000.
Also, they don't really show anything but the last movie in the Evil Dead series, "Army of Darkness" has more weird things between zombies and humans

 

[sweetnpetite]

hey sweetnpetite

if you're looking for a vamp movie with really erotic scenes try to find Wes Craven's Dracula 2000.
Also, they don't really show anything but the last movie in the Evil Dead series, "Army of Darkness" has more weird things between zombies and humans

I know, the ED movies just get sillier and sillier. I like the one w/ the evil ash and the broken mirror.

"Hail to the King, baby!" MY bf thinks that part is funny, lol.

 

[sweetnpetite]

I don't think a vampire should cum. That's what a human would do. For me, it's not what's sexy about a vampire. He should find his release (or give it) in other ways, befiting his character and status.

I'd love to read some erotic vampire tales that don't involve the vampire 'cumming' Does anyone know of any on this site?

Does anybody else have any opinions on this?

 

[Dennis13]

Whenever I see a movie or read a story that has a vamp feeding, the way they describe the vamp's reaction to feeding sounds akin to having an orgasm. A few of the stories here talk about the blood being richer and fuller during a person's orgasm so maybe a good suck for a vamp would let them feel the person's orgasmic energy. While they wouldn't be cumming, they might still feel like it from the other person.(vicarious cumming at it's most extreme?)

 

[Shendude]

Whenever I see a movie or read a story that has a vamp feeding, the way they describe the vamp's reaction to feeding sounds akin to having an orgasm. A few of the stories here talk about the blood being richer and fuller during a person's orgasm so maybe a good suck for a vamp would let them feel the person's orgasmic energy. While they wouldn't be cumming, they might still feel like it from the other person.(vicarious cumming at it's most extreme?)

See, this the problem I have w/ erotic vampire stories.

When a Vampire bites someone, it's not having sex, it's EATING. You don't get all orgasmic when you're having lunch do you?

 

[BlackSnake]

The vampire has sex with the human. At the point when the human cums, the vampire bites. It doesn't have to stop the orgasm