Fantasies_only
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You missed something.cloudy said:Fixed your post for you. You also need to learn comma usage. Commas are your friends.
Editors take note:
GratefulFred said:Also there was someone mention (add ed for past tense) called Sirhugs! Ever since his reincarnation as a stud horse his writting ("writing" - there is only one t in the word) has been great but grammarically (no such word. It should be "grammatically." Those who live in glass houses shouldn't sling stones) off (though some say it's because of his hooves hitting lots of keys at the same time but us in the "know" realize it's him trying to type while fucking). Still always gets a 5 as he totally deserves. (sentence fragment)
Your punishment for such transgression, is to give us some really cool idea to write a story about.
