Update - SFS Prima: Cali

[SpaceToast]

I've made some revisions and submitted my first story to Literotica. I settled on the name "SFS Prima: Cali", altered the opening to make it somewhat less disorienting, and made tweaks here and there. It still gets fast and confusing at the end, as intended, and I suppose a sequel might happen sooner or later if the story's well received. Once again, it's a hard sci-fi story with girl-on-girl sex in zero-gravity. Until it's approved, I've uploaded it here. Cheers-

-M@