Unwitting Incest Question

[MatthewVett]

I'm currently mulling over a possible story for the summer contest, and the basic outline I was thinking of was that a guy and a girl meet, (both of whom tend to go by nicknames, which explains why they can not realize the truth) and the guy invites her to go with him on a cruise, since he's stuck going with his family. She's busy, but then when he gets on the cruise and meets his cousin who he hasn't seen in a while, it's she!

I like the idea that they now need to repress the sexual chemistry that they had earlier, and since they're on a ship, there's not really any way for them to avoid each other, so they're stuck with all this sexual tension.

My question for all of you is: how far should they go before they realize their true relationship? Just longing glances? Should they make out a bit? Maybe she gives him a handjob or blows him? Or do they go all the way, only to be informed that they've just committed incest? I'm leaning towards making out or handjob; not too far. They need something else to do on the ship, after all, but what do you think would make for the best tension?

 

[LibraryVixen]

Personally, I'd really enjoy if they had a very heavy make out session with some heavy petting but maybe they get interrupted or something before they can go too far....perhaps maybe just after one or both of them has shed their clothes...when the sexual tension is at its peak. That way they have this intense level of sexual desire for one another that keeps rearing its head even after their true relationship is revealed.

Sounds like a very interesting story.

 

[RicoLouis]

The funny part is how possable this story is. If they or from a large family with several aunts and uncles with a slight age diffrence they may not realize that easily they or related.

Don't think I would go all the way if i was writing it, deffently some heavy petting maybe some dancing. Wouldn't go farther then BJ OR HJ for their first time. Got to have some direction to go after the reveal.

 

[MatthewVett]

Another idea I've heard outside the forum is for them to find out while in the middle of, for instance, a blowjob. They run into each other on the ship, still unaware, and they sneak off for a blowjob. Right as he's finishing, his mom knocks on the door and asked whether he's seen his cousin, and when they hear her name, they suddenly realize...

 

[NASCARaddicted]

The funny part is how possable this story is. If they or from a large family with several aunts and uncles with a slight age diffrence they may not realize that easily they or related.

Don't think I would go all the way if i was writing it, deffently some heavy petting maybe some dancing. Wouldn't go farther then BJ OR HJ for their first time. Got to have some direction to go after the reveal.

I gotta say I have a big family (depending on how you define big). My father has 6 brothers and 1 sister. So just from my fathers side, I have 8 cousins (male and female). Most of them are older, only 2 of them are younger. When my grandparents where still alive, we saw each other at least twice a year But since my grandparents died many years ago, this family meetings ceased. I think I haven't seen some of them within the last 15-20 years.
The last time, I saw one of my female cousins was like 10 years ago. She has to be around 24 now.

So if I would see her today, I am not sure if I would recognize her. Sure, I know her name, but if she has a funny nickname ...

just imagine, you meet her at a party, and you are introduced to "BJ". She smiles and tells you, that BJ is not just a nickname, but also one of her favorite "activities" ....

So he goes to a cruise, with his family and tells her to come with 'em. They met a few times and have sex (at least oral).

After a few days at dinner, his dad sits at the table and tells them: "do you know what is really funny? Your cousin Betty-Jane is also on this ship. I invited her to sit on our table. She will come in a minute."

Suddenly, BJ comes to the table, sits down and says "hello" to everyone - until she sees the face of her cousin ...

 

[sirhugs]

I think she gave him a partially handjob that got interrupted by someone coming along... thus the unsatisfied sexual tension is high.

 

[lazyhobo]

I think she gave him a partially hand job that got interrupted by someone coming along... thus the unsatisfied sexual tension is high.

Well say that they have multiple interruptions in different activities until they actually meet at dinner time, and with each interruption the sexual frustration grows, causing the next activity to be even more sexual.

So say it starts as a little groping, then a hand job, some oral, perhaps a Boob job, perhaps they are about to have sex.

But during EACH of these activities, or just as they're starting, someone or something interrupts, they stop and try to do another thing down the line, until eventually they realize who the other is.

 

[MatthewVett]

Lazyhobo: I like the edging idea. Coming oh-so-close each time, unable to climax...it'd be such torture...

 

[RicoLouis]

I gotta say I have a big family (depending on how you define big). My father has 6 brothers and 1 sister. So just from my fathers side, I have 8 cousins (male and female). Most of them are older, only 2 of them are younger. When my grandparents where still alive, we saw each other at least twice a year But since my grandparents died many years ago, this family meetings ceased. I think I haven't seen some of them within the last 15-20 years.
The last time, I saw one of my female cousins was like 10 years ago. She has to be around 24 now.

So if I would see her today, I am not sure if I would recognize her. Sure, I know her name, but if she has a funny nickname ...

just imagine, you meet her at a party, and you are introduced to "BJ". She smiles and tells you, that BJ is not just a nickname, but also one of her favorite "activities" ....

So he goes to a cruise, with his family and tells her to come with 'em. They met a few times and have sex (at least oral).

After a few days at dinner, his dad sits at the table and tells them: "do you know what is really funny? Your cousin Betty-Jane is also on this ship. I invited her to sit on our table. She will come in a minute."

Suddenly, BJ comes to the table, sits down and says "hello" to everyone - until she sees the face of her cousin ...

same here mom is one of 6 kids and dad is one of 10, I have about fifty first cousins, Had one actually work with me for a few weeks before i realized who she was because I knew her as a little girl not a grown woman.

 

[AKFlyboy1942]

I've always loved stories like this. Unwittingly having sex with the wrong person is very exciting.

 

[Thefamiliar]

A real life couple brother/sister got married before they found out the truth. (they were both adopted)

If its your first thought to have 'em go all the way then do it. Write what you see in your head, it will translate so much better on paper, the interuptions are good, as the tease can be fun, and builds the climax. But write the worst case (going all the way) if nothing else, for yourself, just to prove that you can. Stepping out of the box is the best way to stretch your ability.