Untitled :: Lullabye

[Cupitsoul]

Into the comfort of night, and the sweet smell of the rain falling upon my face,

Rolling down the subtle curved valleys and beautiful shapely pieces of this women,

If she could only see, the emotions that her body shown,

The crack in my soul is only filled when she smile.

 

[_Land]

Welcome to the lit poetry board, and thanks for sharing your verse, we are always delighted to have new poets here, a few rules of thumb to keep in mind, if you want feedbacvk post one poem at a time or use one thread for your poetry so that the multi thread thing doesnt deter readers, the wya you posted will prevent most from commmenting.


as well most of us keep track of the new poems being submited and review them, see the New poems thread, and feel free to visit one of the chalenge threads and write some new poetry to the challenge material



Good to have you on the board,



_Land

 

[Cupitsoul]

Forgive me....

Forgive my quick and unsightly presence upon your board. I'll stick to the rules and thank you for your time and guidance.

Yours,
Cupit

 

[_Land]

I was new once, and my poetry was rather unsitely LOL


no worries, and I look forward to reading your poetry....


dont be shy, ask questions and have fun.


_Land