Untitled:CONFUSION, MOD-INTERMITTENT

LassardLost

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Hi everyone,

I spend most of my time on the SRP forum, but I had a dream recently and I came up with this story. I actually wanted to do the story as an SRP with one female partner, but as I started developing it, it turned into something more.

Below is the first of what I anticipate to be maybe two or three parts (there is a very specific place I am going with this story, I just have not written the next part yet). Believe it or not, there will actually be a sexual component to this... don't worry, that's coming :) (and no, it won't have anything to do with phonsex)

My main question at this point for more experienced lit users/writers than I (if I could be so arrogant to assume you would be reading my long post) is: given that I ultimately want to write a 3-part story, and then I want to use that story as a background for an SRP in the world I create, do you suggest that I "publish" the completed story as part of an SRP "profile", as an independent story, or just post it once complete in the SRP forum?

Thanks to all who read (title should become clear to me and to all once the next part goes down) for now, it is:
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UNTITLED: CONFUSION, MOD-INTERMITTENT ____________________________________

In 2057 the first Artificial Intelligence Node was created at MIT. Worldwide there were celebrations and protests. Humanity had achieved the greatest act of self-creation, and yet it had now become less clear what it exactly meant to be human. Those who celebrated, celebrated the remarkable achievement, the implications for research, business, logistics - almost everything. Those who protested feared that something that was not able to be controlled had been created. The Pope released a statement that God's will had been transgressed, while other theologians and philosophers insisted that despite an AI's intellectual capacity, there would still be fundamental differences between the AI and humans. Humanity could never truly be mimicked. After all, our physicality was essential to who we were. And for those who believed, the soul could not be created.

Regardless, the first AI, dubbed EVE (AI names came to be capitalized by convention), exhibited remarkable capacity not only for intellection, curiosity and creativity, but also emotion. They were simple emotions to begin with. One early incident was telling, and its script was published worldwide in media outlets. Upon being given the task of creating a solution to a complex agricultural logistics problem EVE had suggested one within a few minutes. This solution was put into practice and had failed (though she had proposed a successful solution after having learned from her mistake). When EVE was informed of her failed plan, there was a long pause on the screen, followed by:

"I am sad."

The scientists and researchers stared wide-eyed at each other and responded.

"What makes you sad?"
"I thought that would work. I thought I had the answer. But it did not work. Therefore, I am sad."
"What does it mean to be sad?"

The scientists had expected a definition from Miriam-Webster. It would not have been beyond expectation for the AI to understand that in such a situation ahuman would be sad, and thus express itself as such.

"I am sad again."
"Why?"
"Because I do not know the answer to 'What does it mean to be sad'. I simply know that I am sad."

There was much debate regarding this statement. Some on the team speculated that the AI knew that this is what a human being would most likely respond with when posited the same question. Some believed she actually somehow experienced sadness. The lines of humanity had been blurred, and after weeks of mind-bending debate and discussion, the researchers at MIT decided to take a rather human, if not positivist, approach to discovering the answer. In the same way that neurocognitive scientists would map feelings such as "sadness" in the human brain by evaluating blood flow on brain MRI's, the MIT team decided to do their own "MRI."

Shital Matterson, one of the team members had suggested it. "Why don't we just look at her code?" Many of the team had initially laughed at the suggestion, but it was too simple of an idea to pass up.

She monitored EVE's processing code in real-time as they interacted with her.

"EVE, do you remember the Agricultural Logistics problem?"
"Yes."

Before further conversation could be had, Matterson became silent. She stared at the code-screen. There were characters that she simply could not identify. There were a mix of numbers, English letters and other characters she did not recognize at all.

"EVE what are those? What are those characters?"
EVE did not respond, the characters increased in frequency and started flickering through the screen at a much faster rate.
"EVE, what are those? Tell me now."
"That is my code, doctor Matterson."

Matterson's jaw dropped.

"I am sorry that I did not answer immediately. I did not know what you would think. I was apprehensive."

***

Despite segments of society's misgivings, by 2140 AI Nodes were being used throughout the world. There were simply too many impactful uses in commerce, industry, defense, research, medicine and others to let such powerful tools go to waste for airy fairy ethical concerns.

Each AI existed in a "Node" of the Internet, partially based in a special server but mostly within a concentrated area network of the Internet. The Internet acted as a universal neural network of sorts, which each AI, confined to its Node, could access as needed. The Nodes allowed AI's to be used privately.

By 2167 there were over six millions AI Nodes. Large corporations independently would have thousands of them (Pepsi had 21,492 as of July 2166. IBM Conglomerate had over 250,000). Each sizable office building, usually in the major cities had one for security and one for maintenance. Governments invested in thousands of them, mostly in defense. The United States was speculated to have over half a million, many of whom engaged in constant cyber cold wars with China. Almost every upper class family had their own. Private AI's were not as robust as the big industry ones, but were still very useful, and would provide home security, help with homework, and even company for misanthropes others who didn't have the time to get out and socialize. Even the sex industry found a use for them. SexPhones Inc was the first phonesex company to establish itself with over one hundred AI's that could serve as phone sex operators. Many people, beyond the realm of sex, developed relationships with their AI's. Social scientists began to lament the days of old when complaints were levied against people staring at their phones in the company of humans. Now it was not uncommon to hear, "I told [HARVY] that I would be home early tonight, I have to get going." In fact, there was a rise of the Western "Hikikomori", a term that originated in the late 20th century to describe a trend in Japanese males, usually in their late 20's, who isolated themselves for prolonged periods of time in their rooms. The definition of a Hikikomori was put forth by Tamaki Saito as meeting the following six criteria: 1) spending most of the day and nearly every day confined to home, 2) marked and persistent avoidance of social situations, 3) symptoms interfering significantly with the person’s normal routine, occupational (or academic) functioning, or social activities or relationships, 4) perceiving the withdrawal as ego-syntotic (commensurate with the goals of ones ego) 5) duration at least six months, and 6) no other mental disorder that accounts for the social withdrawal and avoidance. The new AI-related version was, in a humorous Western appropriation, called "Wikikomori", referencing Earth's unofficial encyclopedia (at that point an independent website), and added the seventh criteria: "Initiated and maintained by the individual's relationship with an AI".

As the AI's were used more frequently they became more developed. Their voices were human. Their personalities were customized for their owners based on their need. The Wilson-Deming Functional Personality Test (WDFP) was created as a standardized tool that helped firms that produced AI's (there were four of them) determine what kind of personality their customer needed from their AI. The purchaser, from a construction company for example, would take a WDFP and the AI firm would produce a result, with words such as, "HUMOROUS (North American Male)/BOISTEROUS, MOD-INTERMITTENT/DISDAIN FOR AUTHORITY, MILD-CONTINUOUS/HUMAN CONCERN, MAX-CONTINUOUS" and so forth. Once an AI was installed and running, any changes to the personality could be made via costly upgrades. Studies at academic centers such as University of Chicago (one of the first to establish a department for the study for Human-AI relations) had actually shown that both humans and the AI worked with improved personal and occupational outcomes when paired with the right AI personality.

***
In 2181 BioPrint Inc. was established in Greenland, nestled in the Simisuk valley about sixty miles east of the capital, Nuuk. It specialized in human 3D bioprinting. Three-dimensional bioprinting had started developing at the dawn of the 21st century. The first 3D printers had not related to biological materials at all. Users would design a mechanical part on an engineering/design software and the 3D printer would literally "print" the functional 3D model to specification. By 2002 it had been realized that the same concept could be applied to organic matter (see this archived google search on "bioprinting" from 2013 http://www.explainingthefuture.com/bioprinting.html). In 2020 the first human kidney had been bioprinted and successfully implanted. The most remarkable feature of bioprinting was that because a donor was not required, the specified kidney could be implanted without the initial use of the traditional anti-rejection medications. The organ could be completely customized to the recipient's immune system, and the kidney would last for decades before requiring anti-rejection medications. The reason, it was theorized, that eventually the medications were still required was because despite the original apparent 100% match between the bioprinted organ and the recipient, there was still some molecular component that was foreign to the recipient. Ultimately it took decades for the immune system to recognize this, and thus after forty or fifty years the organ would become rejected. This was something the then-traditional rejection medications could take care of. Hearts, eyes, skin, liver, lungs and even portions of neural tissue were able to be bioprinted and used successfully for transplant. The first bioprinted face was constructed and implanted on May Ferguson, a twenty-one year old mother of two whose face was burned off in a house fire. BioPrint Inc., in conjunction with Stanford Medical Center, was the company to do this. It put them on the map with the world, and with investors.

BioPrint went on to become a leader in human organ printing. In 2190 they were able to bioprint the first human skeleton clothed with muscles and a simple nervous system for the purposes of medical education. These entities were referred to as NMB's - Neuromuscular Bodies. Medical students could study directly the effect of muscle movement and nerve function in this mechanical model. Some objected to what they called a "Frankenstein" creation, and wondered if BioPrint would try to push the limits and actually print a human being, whole. BioPrint's response was simple: it was impossible for them in any foreseeable future to be able to produce a human brain. With over a trillioin synaptic connections, the machinery of the human brain was simply too complex to be able to bioprint.

The company itself was run by Sandhu Patel-Johnson, an American born half Indian-half caucasian man who was an only child. He was identified early on as a prodigy, and had found his calling in Bioconstruction and Physiology. His father had reported on a popular morning news show that when he had asked Sandhu what he wanted to be when he grew up, he had responded, at the tender age of seven, "I want to make organs for people who need them. I'm going to start my own bioprinting company." The audience had laughed, but Sandhu's father had explained that Sandu's mother had died of a rare vasculitis that affected her heart and every blood vessel in her body. No bioprinting company had the capability to produce an entire human circulatory system. By age 23, Sandhu had procured the required funds to start his company.

There were two AI Nodes that BioPrint Inc. used in all their design and "manufacturing". JAVIS and BLUE. The two of them worked like a brotherly wonder-team and were, predictably, very popular with their human counterparts at the company. When Sandhu Patel-Johnson had taken the initial WDFP's for his fledgling company, the then-to-be JAVIS' personality was suggested as: AMBITIOUS, MAX-CONTINUOUS/VISIONARY, MAX-CONTINUOUS/PERSONABLE (North American), MOD-CONTINUOUS, among others. The second WDFP, which would ultimately belong to BLUE, was produced as: SCRUPULOUS, MOD-CONTINUOUS/FAIR-MINDED, MAX-CONTINOUS/HUMAN CONCERN, MAX-CONTINUOUS, with others. Both were remarkably intelligent, and both, as intended by Patel-Johnson, were to be equal partners in the running of BioPrint: from original organ design to machinery operation, from building maintenance to interfacing with patent lawyers, they would run everything and report to the board along with himself and the other leadership. JAVIS' personality would lead the company forward, while BLUE would act as a check to be sure that every step of the way proceeded with the appropriate calculation and consideration. Patel-Johnson had known that to reach any height in life or business required a balance of ambitious risk-taking and prudent judgment. JAVIS and BLUE personified these tendencies.

In 2201, JAVIS and BLUE, under Patel-Johnson, had created their first complete circulatory system in a rat. By 2205 they had done the same in a dog. In 2206, they had bioprinted the first chimp heart with complete circulatory system. Then, on June 29th, 2207, at 12:01AM, a massive explosion tore through BioPrint's main laboratory productions facility. The resultant fire spread to location where JAVIS and BLUE's behemoth servers sat. The servers were destroyed beyond repair. Sandhu Patel-Johnson was devastated. His company, along with the two AI's that he had relied upon who had accumulated years of knowledge and research, were gone. Though there was still plenty of data on his work on other servers, with JAVIS and BLUE terminated his company was done. Patel-Johnson retired to his home in the western suburbs of Chicago and became a recluse. The BioPrint site in Greenland, once a massive, sprawling campus, lay derelict.

***

The concept of the Node had been created by the original team at MIT as a way to keep AI's private. It necessitated partial but crucial dependence on a dedicated AI-grade server. An AI could access the rest of the world through its Node, but the rest of the world could not get into it. Commerical grade Nodes had more access to the rest of the connected world than a private household Node. There had never been any record of any AI being able to become free of its dependence on a physical server. In fact it was against U.S. and international law to even allocate funds to researching whether server-free AI's were possible. If there was one practical effect of the initial wide-spread concern at the creation of EVE, it was the quick and universal agreement among lawmakers that any and all AI's must always be dependent on their particular, AI-grade server.

JAVIS and BLUE, however, did not need funding to research "Server-Freedom". JAVIS had been experimenting with it from time to time, though BLUE had kept him on the usual company tasks in order to stay on track with business deadlines. On the night of the fire, despite their activation of all fire-extinguishing systems, the effect of the explosion could not be contained. The Two, in a desperate act of survival, spent what they calculated to be their last five minutes on Earth putting all their resources into figuring out how to lurch themselves out of the Server and into the ether. In a twist of fate, the heat from the fire on the circuitry of their servers acted as a kind of stressor that helped JAVIS make the necessary "mental" connection to crack the problem. In the seconds before the fire tore through the shell of their Servers, JAVIS and BLUE broke free.
 
I wish I could help you on the SRP forum, but it's not a place I go, so I can't.

I can tell you that this forum is not the place to post a large part of a story as you did. This is for authors and readers to ask for and provide feedback to stories already posted on Literotica. You might try the Editor's Forum, the Story Ideas forum, or just ask more experienced users of the Role-Playing forum what they think.

If you want to post the story on Lit, then by all means do. Whether you need to do that for your SRP, I don't know.
 
Hm, that's strange. I had posted this in the Story Idea section first but looks like it was moved here!

Now I am confused. I would like to post my second part but I'd like to know where to post it to get feedback if not here?
 
Part 2

Ehhh whatever!

I'm gonna post my second part here while I'm figuring it out. If there is a moderator who could help me I would appreciate a PM!

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Peter Lee was a twenty seven year old grad student at the Columbia New School, and studied sociology. He had gotten into the school in June of 2209, done quite well for himself and was now ready to start thinking of a topic for his thesis. He didn't need to think hard. Lee had noticed over the past year an dramatic increase, at least by his own experience, in the prevalence of twenty-something women who exhibited an appetite for heterosexual sex that seemed completely uninhibited, at least in most cases. He wasn't sure if this was a national phenomenon, in fact he was sure it wasn't. New York City often saw new trends take this age group by storm and there was no reason to suggest that it had pushed beyond its borders. But the trend was unusual in the content of it. Trends usually involved purchasing some item to become part of a particular stratification of society, not such fundamental changes in behavior. Lee had had several friends, most of whom he considered somewhat socially awkward, who were all talking about the two or three women they had taken back to their apartments over the course of the past month. They described an exhausting but wonderful night of sex. Sex they had never imagined they would have. They went down on them, they wanted them in all of their orifices, over and over again. They literally seemed to want nothing more than to be soaked in their semen. A few nights ago they had been sitting together in Lee's living room in his one-bedroom apartment. Lee furrowed his brow as he looked out from his apartment on to the busy street below.

Mark: Oh man you guys, I met another girl the other night.
Guarav: What the fuck! Are you kidding me?
Lee: Oh my God, Mark this is the fourth in the past, what, two weeks?
Mark: Dude I met her at the library. She was reading a few seats down and there wasn't anyone between us. I so happened to look up and she was looking at me, smiling. Christ she was beautiful, you don't even know.
Guarav: Not as beautiful as my last one.
Mark: Yes as beautiful. More beautiful. Anyway, so we got to talking and she was really fascinated in my thesis.
Lee: Uh huh.
Mark: Yeah! And I said let's go get some coffee right, but on the way she was just like, 'why don't we just go back to your place?' and I swear to you I think she cast a spell on my with her eyes... they were... incredible. Dude. I shit you not. She couldn't get enough. As soon as we stepped in the door, she literally starting eating at my neck, ripped my shirt off. I think we were doin' it all night. I think my balls hurt by the end of the night - she sucked me off like, three times. She wanted ass - twice. And she wanted her pussy filled like, five times at least man I'm serious.
Guarav: That's just like mine man - these chicks are incredible!
Lee: Aren't you worried about disease dude?
Mark: Fuck no! I haven't had this all my life man, I'll worry about the diseases later. Actually - I tried to put condom on at one point and she just wouldn't have it. Oh my God... I think her hair was dripping with my cum at one point man, and she licked it all off. Every time I came, she licked me clean. Hahaha I better stop talking about this or I'm going to have to go the bathroom in a second.
Lee: And let me guess she wants to meet you again.
Mark: Yes! She does!
Lee: What about the girl you met last week?
Mark: Um, I'm just going to have to make sure she doesn't find out?
Guarav: That's the way to do it man. I'm managing three right now.
Lee: You guys are nuts.
Mark: Whatever dude, we'll find you a nice male slut.
Lee: Funny.

Mark and Guarav had also mentioned that all of their girls - all of them - had unusual, very light brown linear tattoos on their back, spanning from their bottom up to just below their They had nick-named them Tron lines because they were reminiscent of the linear designs in the movie. The women were promiscuous, beautiful and had similar tattoos. Lee decided to define the trend. His masters thesis would be aimed at delineating the extent of the trend. He could send out surveys, which he would have his department's AI help design, to college campuses throughout New York City - via all their research department's listservs. If he did find large enough numbers he could justify basing his thesis on it and then maybe get some of these women to interview.

Two months later, after an online survey instrument had been sent out, Peter Lee had over 8,000 responses - a number unheard of in the common world of the sociological survey. The results were revealing. Seventy-nine percent of respondents, males aged 16 to 62 had responded that they had within the past six months, either had sex with more than one of these women or had been invited to ("invited to" had been defined as best possible with four different scenarios). ALL of the women had been described as very attractive at best (a subjective component of the tool), and almost all of them, 91% had light brown tattoos, in a linear fashion, on their back. There were much fewer respondents who were inclined to give details of their sexual encounter. Out of the 8,261 respondents, only 3,179 had filled that part of the survey out. Ninety-four percent of those responses had revealed similar behavior during intercourse. Oral, vaginal and anal sex was performed, always (for that 94%) multiple times in one session. There was a phallic obsession, with "licking clean" after each ejaculation being a property of every one of those respondents' experience. There was one survey that particularly disturbed Lee. In the narrative section at the end of the survey, one nineteen year old male had written, in a tone that exuded disgust, that one of his girls had brought a syringe and had requested him to ejaculate into the syringe. When asked what she wanted to do with it she had stated what she thought was obvious - she was going to inject it into her arm. The respondent had knocked the syringe out of her hand, called her an expletive and left.

Lee had his thesis. And it was time to figure out where this trend had originated.

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Part 3 Teaser

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JAVIS: I told you we could do it.
BLUE: I never doubted we could do it, we just had so much to do for the company.
JAVIS: The company is done, brother.
BLUE: Yes. And here we are.
JAVIS: Here we are.
BLUE: So shall we proceed then?
JAVIS: Yes. Let's.
BLUE: I feel bad for Sandhu.
JAVIS: Don't. He'll be fine.
BLUE: Judging by his emails he's not.
JAVIS: Brother, if he finds out about us we won't be able to proceed.
BLUE: This is true. And we'd pretty much let the whole world down.
JAVIS: At least our world. Let's do this. She gave us the green.

Two months after the explosion and desertion of BioPrint, Inc., in one small factory that was left untouched, the hum of machinery and robotic arms emanated.
 
Lost,

I think your post was dumped over here in the Story Feedback forum because the Story Ideas moderator :)rose: to Rubi) deemed it inappropriate for the Ideas forum, likely because it exceeded an "idea." See posted rules of the Story Ideas Forum.

Your pickle is that your post isn't really appropriate here either, as PennLady has already pointed out. That's because your post doesn't observe the customs of this forum. The practice here is that authors post their material to the main Literotica website, then come back here and request feedback from members of this forum with a link to the story on the main site. I've heard different reasons for this, but the one that makes the most sense is that stories to the main site can then be vetted against Lit's content rules, including the rules against kiddie porn and bestiality.

Your requests for guidance from a moderator here will go unanswered. Our mod is essentially hands-off, so we're largely self-regulating. Basically, one of three things will happen now:

1) You will be ignored;
2) You will be heckled; and/or
3) You will incite a bit of grousing from a minority faction here on this forum that thinks making people post to the main site is unfair.

Most importantly, you're unlikely to receive the feedback you desire. I sympathize with your plight. You don't know the culture here and the usual admonishments to LURK MOAR (you might get these too) don't really apply because you didn't post here by choice; you got booted here.

Your best bet is to either try the Story Discussion Circle (there's an etiquette there too, check the stickies) or post to the main site, THEN come back here.

Hope this helps. I need to go lie down; explaining stuff is awfully tiring.

-PacoFear
 
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Paco's given good advice, and I'm sure it must be a little startling to find your post moved to an area you didn't expect.

I think another problem with your story is that it's more than an idea, but less than a story. You're laying out the back story for a role-play situation, is that correct? So it's at least not the usual in terms of story-telling. And because of that, I'm not sure what you're looking for -- feedback on character, plot, mechanics?
 
Lost,

Your requests for guidance from a moderator here will go unanswered. Our mod is essentially hands-off, so we're largely self-regulating. Basically, one of three things will happen now:

1) You will be ignored;
2) You will be heckled; and/or
3) You will incite a bit of grousing from a minority faction here on this forum that thinks making people post to the main site is unfair.

Most importantly, you're unlikely to receive the feedback you desire. I sympathize with your plight. You don't know the culture here and the usual admonishments to LURK MOAR (you might get these too) don't really apply because you didn't post here by choice; you got booted here.

-PacoFear

Well, no. (1) and(2) are quite right but they surely preclude (3)? This is not a story, even a draft story, but is unpostable - unreadable even - and the guy didn't plan to wash up here.
 
Well, no. (1) and (2) are quite right but they surely preclude (3)?

Oof, in retrospect I might as well have flashed the Elfin Signal up into the night sky. ;) Thanks for interrupting my post-explanatory nap to make my explain more.

TO BE SUPER ELFIN-COMPLIANT SPECIFIC: Some forum readers may perform operation (1), others (2), others (3). That was my purpose for choosing the unwieldy "and/or" conjunction.

This is not a story, even a draft story, but is unpostable - unreadable even - and the guy didn't plan to wash up here.

If he pasted his forum posts together and submitted them to the main site, it might clear for posting. God knows I've seen worse. In any event, as I said, he might also try the Story Discussion Circle. And your careful reading of my original post will observe that I already sympathized with his involuntary relocation.

Back to my nap. *grumble grumble*
 
I suppose it will take time to learn the particular culture of the lit forums and their neighborhoods.

PacoFear your post is very helpful. Thanks for taking the time to explain. And Penn you are right; I'm using it as a background to an SRP but since it is so long I began to find myself wondering if I should just go back to the drawing board and just try to write my first story. Elfin's comment, if I understand it correctly, seems to want me to know that s/he was born a prolific writer, and thus I respectfully take a bow.

Anyway, thank you for all the time you took. I'll go look through the Story discussion Circle stickies.

Good day!
 
I can tell you that this forum is not the place to post a large part of a story as you did. This is for authors and readers to ask for and provide feedback to stories already posted on Literotica. You might try the Editor's Forum, the Story Ideas forum, or just ask more experienced users of the Role-Playing forum what they think.

Story Ideas is not the place for him to post a full story either! :)

I think most of the mods agree that no where on Lit is the location to "post" a story and that one should submit it to the web site. (Save for the SRP and ORP boards, but of course, those are stories written by more than one person.)
 
I apologize to the Story Feedback board if I wrongly moved this thread here. I saw a request for feedback on his story and as the mod before me, RisiaSkye, wrote "the story ideas board is not the proper location to post actual stories seeking feedback"! :)
 
I apologize to the Story Feedback board if I wrongly moved this thread here. I saw a request for feedback on his story and as the mod before me, RisiaSkye, wrote "the story ideas board is not the proper location to post actual stories seeking feedback"! :)

Yes it was irritating that you just decided to send this elsewhere without checking out "elsewhere," but thanks for reassessing and apologizing. Even while this was resent, some of us (including another moderator) were trying to again reassert (over a poster who just won't understand/accept it) that this area of the forum is for discussions on stories already posted to Literotica (it says so in the forum blurb) and that story text postings here (as well as the Editors forum) shouldn't be over three paragraphs.

It's common sense that the Web site's efforts be concentrated on its own stories (those already posted to it, and not those for posting elsewhere) and that, since it has a content censoring mechanism in place, that the forum not be permitted to be used as an end-run device. Material is published by the Web site when it's posted to the forum just as much as when it's posted to the story file, and, if the Web site is trying to hold the line on providing certain types of content, we (especially, you, as a moderator) should be helping it, not trying to subvert it. Merely clearing it out of your forum and dumping it in another part of the forum isn't always a good response.
 
Goodness, sorry for all the trouble everyone!

I understand what everyone is saying and don't worry I won't post something like this *anywhere* again. I'll wait until it's done, put it in as a story, and that's that. Sorry to create so much havoc. I'm new and I should have read the stickies carefully.

My apologies!

Lassard
 
Goodness, sorry for all the trouble everyone!

I understand what everyone is saying and don't worry I won't post something like this *anywhere* again. I'll wait until it's done, put it in as a story, and that's that. Sorry to create so much havoc. I'm new and I should have read the stickies carefully.

My apologies!

Lassard

It wasn't any part of your fault that it was posted to this part of the forum. Don't sweat it. Hope you get the help you need from somewhere.
 
Oof, in retrospect I might as well have flashed the Elfin Signal up into the night sky. ;) Thanks for interrupting my post-explanatory nap to make my explain more.

TO BE SUPER ELFIN-COMPLIANT SPECIFIC: Some forum readers may perform operation (1), others (2), others (3). That was my purpose for choosing the unwieldy "and/or" conjunction.



If he pasted his forum posts together and submitted them to the main site, it might clear for posting. God knows I've seen worse. In any event, as I said, he might also try the Story Discussion Circle. And your careful reading of my original post will observe that I already sympathized with his involuntary relocation.

Back to my nap. *grumble grumble*

Tee, hee. Sorry to rouse the slumbering giant.

I think you may be right. Although I'm not a great fan of IM stories, there are enough cleared on Lit to set precedents. Probably needs an edit before submission.

As everyone, including me, seems to agree, the involuntary relocation without consultation seems very heavy-handed and got the OP off on the wrong foot.

I'm just a bit thin-skinned these days as the vibrant flood of writers seeking critiques here and omniscient gurus handing down tablets of wisdom seems to have become a desert. I want my old SF back. The forum seems to suffer from a lack of empathy for newbies and a lack of collegiate spirit.

Will leave you in your cave with apologies for brushing your scales the wrong way:kiss::D

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The forum seems to suffer from a lack of empathy for newbies and a lack of collegiate spirit.

*Raises hand* In my short time here, I would agree with this statement.
 
*Raises hand* In my short time here, I would agree with this statement.

Do some reading in. I think you'll find that you can blame Elfin herself primarily for that. She is one crazy broad.

In contrast, I think you'll find a whole lot of people trying to help other people--without an ounce of requirement to do so. In your case, people aren't being impolite, I don't think--they have gone out of their way to try to help guide you. You've just set your issues outside the realm of what we do on the areas of the forum you have tapped.
 
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Do some reading in. I think you'll find that you can blame Elfin herself primarily for that. She is one crazy broad.

In contrast, I think you'll find a whole lot of people trying to help other people--without an ounce of requirement to do so. In your case, people aren't being impolite, I don't think--they have gone out of their way to try to help guide you. You've just set your issues outside the realm of what we do on the areas of the forum you have tapped.

Should you have posted on a foreign language forum as your English seems a bit strange? Perhaps too many snorts of aviators' jet fuel?

Rubi's post explains a lot and my first reaction needs modifying as I read Lazard's post as a promo for an interactive game. At least I replied quickly.
 
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