Unique Idea I have been thinking of

[somewhere251]

So, I was thinking of an idea. My mind at times gets a lil crazy creatively.

Anyways, the idea is of a Femdomme that specializes in Financial Domination, but now she is in trouble with the law for Fraud, and the only two options for her is that she would go to prison for ten or so years or she could keep her freedom in the eyes of the state but have to go under the "custody" of the submissive's family to pay back what she took from the family.

What do you guys think of this idea?

 

[naughtygaywriter]

I like the idea, but take the law out of it. Have her accountant or someone black mail her into providing her services for him or they'll turn her into the law.

 

[CuteSlaveLisa]

Or the victim's accountant/business manager

1. It explains loyalty to victim. (her accountant could just be after the money she stole).

2. It sets up a potential domination situation, where the A/BM is ostensibly protecting his employer. But is really getting his or her jollies by virtue of his or her forced control of the grifter.

JMO, your idea has potential.

Lisa Ann

 

[Hypoxia]

My usual question: How do you see the story ending? My tricky technique: The setup is there. Visualize the ending; work backward to build the story. Does the domme go sub but eventually re-emerge on top? Does she recount her life from a jail cell or executive suite? Is she molested by tentacle creatures?

 

[CuteSlaveLisa]

...Is she molested by tentacle creatures?

Nope, rainbow colored unicorns.

Or: Initially blackmailed by the A/BM, it starts out equal parts getting the money back for his employer so as to not have to explain his lack of oversight and revenge for being compromised. As the story progresses the ex-dom gives up her vain, unhappy existance as a grifter. Being bound and helpless and used by others for thier purposes, just as she had done, gives her the gift of introspection. She was miserable trying to steal enough money to buy happiness. She loves being on the receiving end of the A/BMs physical dominance. He sees transformation in her and becomes more involved in helping her work out her demons. But the scale of the loss gets the original victim involved. He is not interested or impressed by her transformation. And she is left the property of two men, one who has become quite affectionate (it wasn't his money after all) and one not so much.

Should include plenty of Spit Roasting.

Lisa Ann