Madame Manga
Really Really Experienced
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Removed for personal reasons; I apologize.
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Madame Manga said:In a public review of a story of mine (not published here for lack of sex) the critic objected to this word in this sentence:
"Yes?" said Cameo, trying to convey uninterest in her ex-husband's opinions on any subject whatsoever.
She boldfaced "uninterest" as I have done here and characterized its use as "extremely awkward". When I read the review I emailed her and asked her to be more specific, but have as yet received no answer.
I have a sneaking suspicion that she would prefer "disinterest" in this context, and my reply would be, of course, that "disinterest" is objectivity, a lack of bias through having no stake in the matter at hand. "Uninterest" is indifference, and of course, that is what I'm talking about.
Or is it something else?
Madame Manga said:"Yes?" said Cameo, trying to convey uninterest in her ex-husband's opinions on any subject whatsoever.
Only if you feel it, hon.raphy said:Oops, am I being gauche again, 'dita?
Madame Manga said:"Yes?" said Cameo, trying to convey uninterest in her ex-husband's opinions on any subject whatsoever.
MM
Madame Manga said:"Yes?" said Cameo, trying to convey uninterest she held in her ex-husband's opinions on any subject whatsoever.
A piece of advice I found invaluable was to read a work aloud, or even better get someone else to read it to you.Madame Manga said:... My ear is sometimes deaf in this respect ...