Uni Fun

[1425]

Hello, I'm kinda new to this stuff so, give me a chance before flaming me .

I have an idea, that I'll like someone else to write for me, about a guy thats living (in a rented house) with 3/4 other females all about the same age (20 or so ). But in order for him to see them in a different light, he says that hes really gay.

Then because of this, the girls dont mind wearing less since he would not be looking them up and down, cos he would be only after guys.

Also to spice thing up the girls could have a bet to see which one of them can sleep with the guy the first to try and "turn" him stright.

Anyways just an idea, if something like this has already being done then I'm sorry and could you please give me a link so I can find it,

Thx

 

[flawed_ethics]

My brief take

I think this is a clever idea, actually. Nothing new I'm sure, but it's new to me.

How I would adopt it:

Maybe to not drag it out over the course of a year, it's focused on the summer instead. A college freshman/sophomore in the dorms is desperate to find housing for the summer. Finds an ad that suits his college-life needs, except that it's with three other women who are looking for a fourth woman. He applies and to try to secure it, he mentions he's a homosexual (although he isn't, as suggested above).

Of course, he's taken in and the casual skimpiness ensues. The story would need to take a vouyer appeal to be interesting, since in order for him not to get bitch slapped by three women, he needs to remain 'gay'. It could even take a comedy aspect - he goes shopping and sunbathing with some of his housemates. They compare the buns of other men as they walk along the streets, etc...

He could hook up with a housemate at the end of the term too. She finds him charming, and he develops a crush on her.

The ending would be tough though. Realistically, I would hope the character has the courtesy to just remain casual friends with the women. The average jerk-off reader might expect him to hold daily orgies with them.

The story idea as proposed is really open ended. I'd be interested to see where someone rus with it.

 

[1425]

Thats sounds great, you've even thought of some ideas I would never of thought of

Thanxs for your input

 

[Monazwx]

That summer session idea is fantastic.
Maybe this guy sees the girl around campus and has crush on her before he applies to rent the place.
Or they could be in the same class and she happens to mention it in passing.

This could also work for lesbians and/or threesomes. Very adaptable.
Pretty good story idea here.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

great idea.

but a small comment: I think the guy shouldn't tell them that he is gay. Maybe somehow, there is this rumour floating around, that he is gay ....

Maybe one of this girls is his sister. She knows that he ain't gay (and so, she is the only one who doesn't try to "turn him around") (so there is no incest in this story). But she doesn't tell this to the other girls.

This stuff reminds me on this one movie "Some like it hot". Remember, Tony Curtis ? He told Marilyn Monroe, that he doesn't feel anything when he kisses a girl .... so Marilyn starts to kiss him ... at first, Curtis says, he feels nothing, but after some time, he admits, that he feels "something".

Now, think about this, when it comes to Lit. The guy has sex with the first girl - and he affirms that he is still gay. After he has sex with some more girls, he admits, that he has some positive feelings to girls - so maybe if this group of girls keeps on having sex with him, maybe he could be "turned around"

 

[1425]

Cool

Glad you like it

Would it be possible for someone to write a story alone these lines then?

I really like this idea though...........

"Now, think about this, when it comes to Lit. The guy has sex with the first girl - and he affirms that he is still gay. After he has sex with some more girls, he admits, that he has some positive feelings to girls - so maybe if this group of girls keeps on having sex with him, maybe he could be "turned around""

Also like the sister idea, because it would add a "3rd eye" kinda to it for an extra twist, maybe his sister could be bi with one of the other girls

Just a though

 

[NASCARaddicted]

well, I don't know if the sister is bi or anything.

But anyway: She knows that her brother is not that good at flirting with girls. So when the sister finds out that the other girls want to have sex with her brother (to turn him around) she thinks that it's cool, because finally, her brother will have some sex ....

 

[1425]

Now all we need to someone able to write this.......

Any takers?

 

[flawed_ethics]

I would if I could...

I'm not hot about the sister thing. Unless she's an outsider. An older sister then. Same college, but different house.

If you put them in the same house, you just know they'll go at it. Even if you don't write it as such, you'll be bombarded with feedback insisting they do. And thus negative feedback that they don't (not that it's a popularity thing - but my scores are low enough as they are!)

As for him not being able to hook up (despite him appearing normal otherwise), and having this repuatation that he's gay, it would work.

I still need to finish my current drafts though. When they're refined, I can consider committing myself.

 

[snooper]

I would if I could... I can consider committing myself.

<Goes on bended knee, hold her hand and gazes up into her face> Please say you will?

 

[1425]

Thats great, I look forward to it

 

[flawed_ethics]

<Goes on bended knee, hold her hand and gazes up into her face> Please say you will?

Well, actually, I just finished proofreading my draft for one story, and have put my other project on indefinate hold (it's done as a draft, but I would feel better if it were addressed later). So yeah, I can get my fingers to try a go at it. No promises.

BTW, I'm a guy.

 

[1425]

I look forward to reading it

 

[1425]

Any news on how the storys going?

 

[nolank]

TV Program

The TV version of this had the suspicious landlord upstairs always trying to catch the guy having sex with the girls he lived with. Dumb Blonde is as close as I can come to describing the program. Ran for years.
Landlord would see something and it changed before his wife got a glimpse.

TV audience wanted to see what you propose.

 

[flawed_ethics]

He he he, well, how patient are ya?

I've outlined it, including detail on the pivitol scenes. Character backgrounds are established for the most part.

My only hang up is with the sister. If he does sleep with the roommates by the end, the reader is going to expect some sort of tension built up with the sister. After all, she was able to get him the sublet by insisting he was gay - and now both her brother and her roommates are the ones having fun without her.

I think keeping incest out is important. So it can't end with brother bagging sister. I really can't imagine she'd be willing to throw her arms up in the air about the issue.

Also, do they ('gay' guy and his summer roommates) simply fuck happily ever after? Makes for an easier wrap-up, but seems like a cop-out to me.

So, I guess some questions I have for the peanut gallery:
1) Which would be better, a fleshed out story or a shorter story?
2) Should he sleep with all his roommates (except his sister), or just one?
--> My thinking is his lust for a particular roommate is offset by him pretending to be gay - which sets up a handful of good scenes ... one in particular I like includes when she staggers home from a bar one night with some schmoe, and they proceed to get it on in the room next to his. He can hear the whole thing and is enraged by his own desire to be that guy. Nothing like jealous love.

Since I'm still undecided how it will resolve, I haven't officially started it yet - I need to know where things are going before I actually start. Feel free to lob ideas at me if you want.

 

[LustiRusti]

Re: TV Program

The TV version of this had the suspicious landlord upstairs always trying to catch the guy having sex with the girls he lived with. Dumb Blonde is as close as I can come to describing the program. Ran for years.
Landlord would see something and it changed before his wife got a glimpse.

TV audience wanted to see what you propose.

lol Three's Company.