Unfinished story for a thinking lady to assist me with..

mman

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I have a story that I have started to write several times,but for some reason,never finished...

It concerns a 22 year old Puerto Rican inner-city street kid named Juan that has found himself the periodic lover of an older,wealthy world famous female infant neuro-surgeon...Juan is a gang member that is constantly running scams, cons, drugs, and general hustles of every kind.. Juan is also strikingly handsome in that way many Latinos are when they are young....At 22, in HIS world, he has had far more than enough ladies of all sorts to know what he likes...and he especially likes nasty humiliation, Domination, pissing, tit slapping, assfucking, and physical & verbal abuse of all kinds....

Enter the good Dr.Mary...at 42,Mary is actually still quite lovely, but has always been much into more substantial things than to worry about such trivial matters as looks...With her money,education and position, Mary can have her pick of Men... she is aware of it...but a conventional relationship carries it's own burdens and responsibilities...and to Mary, that is simply an unacceptable amount of time spent away from what she was put on this earth to do...take care of "her" children....However, a girl DOES have her needs and desires..

It took an initial,chance meeting-after-a-flattire-brutal rape of Mary by Juan...that had allowed Mary to discover that exactly the things Juan so enjoys...are the very things that in some curious way, "recharges her batteries" and temporarily lift the weight of the world off her slender shoulders....

What I want to do is, while still writing a nasty,graphic fuck story, *lol*...is try and capture the part of Juan that somehow knows that while otherwise a piece of shit, that he is doing a good thing for humanity when he "services" the needs of this strong,bright,incredibly talented woman...I also want to capture the part of Mary that tries to understand the periodic demons that push her to call Juan when the load gets too heavy...

I think it would be fun, for instance... to have her call Juan in a crack house at 3:00 a.m on his cell phone while dressed to the max...fresh from a black tie charity fund raiser...him promptly tearing her $600.00 blouse to shreds and forcing her to dress like a hooker...or perhaps him forcing her to drive down to the ghetto to see him in her new red Mercedes convertible...Him agreeing,but forcing her to pay him..Juan then driving them around in her Benz past the alleys,crack houses and seedy streets that make up his world...stopping off to enjoy various perversions and adventures along the way....

Anyway, if somebody is into playing the part of Mary to my Juan...or tossing the whole thing into a story chain, with numerous people participating as it moved along...it would all be cool with me..

Regards

MMan
 
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