Hey guys, i'm currently in the middle of writing this story, i was wondering if any of you could give me feedback on it so far and any advice on where the story should go, i'm a little stuck for ideas, thanks.
It was 16:30 on Friday evening, Becky was walking alone through the park, she had just finished her after college dance classes, which she regualrly attends, and was now heading home.
Becky was wearing a long black coat, to her kness which covered her tight dance pants and equally tight white vest. Her hair was straight and black, flowing just down below her shoulders, ontop of a face that surely belongs to an angel. Her body was firm and tight, no small part down to the dancing she does, however it was still womanly and smooth, not muscly. Other than her beautiful face, the most noticable part of her body, well, certainley from a mans point of view, was her impressive chest. Her breasts stuck out proudly from her chest, large, but firm and in place, not a bit of sag to them, which was a miracle due to their size, roughly 42D, but maybe slightly larger.
"Oooh, i'm busting for a pee," Becky thought to herself. She was walking through the park and knew there was a small public toilet there, however it was rarely used due to its reputation as a hotspot for drug deals, rapes and murders (according to the news). "Screw it, this can't wait," Becky hurried, knees closed tightly together towards the small, graffitied toilet in the corner of the park.
"Hey baby," Becky looked over at a group of four black, old homeless men sat on a bench eyeing her. Becky shrugged off the mens lude comments and whistles as she rushed into the toilet. There had been an increase in homeless people recently in the town, probably something to do with the economic situation, especially in the black community of town. Which was a shame as the town used to be a nice place, now however it has had a vast increase in crime.
Becky shut the door behind her,removed her long coat, lowered her tights and panties and sat down on the toilet.
"Aghhhh," Becky released with a pleasurable sense of relief, as she peed she took time to study the horrible cubicle she was in, vulgar graffiti and images were on all sides, and confusingly, she also noticed three fist sized holes, one infront, one left and one right. Becky jumped as she thought she heard something outside the cubicle, but after listening closely she shrugged it off. Becky stood up, put her coat back on and reached for the door handle, it came off.
"SHIT!" Becky shouted at her predicament, she clawed at the sides of the door frantically trying to force it open, but with no luck.
Becky then heard multiple footsteps outside the cubicle.
"Hello? Can you help me please i'm stuck in here!" She shouted to the mystery people on the other side.
"Are you okay in there miss?" A man on the other side asked.
"Oh thankyou, can you help me out of here please?"
"Sure, sit on the toilet and cover your face and close your eyes, i'm gonna break the door down!"
Becky complied by getting in a ball position on the toilet, arms covering her face. She heard noises and mumbled discussions outside but after a minute the man had made no attempt to break the door down. Becky removed her arms from her face and opened her eyes.
"Aaaargh!" Becky screamed when she saw the sights infront of her, through the 3 holes she had noticed earlier there were 3, monstrous,flaccid black cocks. Becky backed away and crawled back onto the toilet, she kept backing up until she felt something bump the back of her head. Becky turned her head around only to have another giant black cock brush across her cheek and rest on her nose.
"AAAAAGH!" Becky screamed again and fell backwards onto the cold tiled floor of the cubicle, Becky started to panic as she assessed her predicament, surrounded on all four sides by black cocks and with no way out.
"What do you want from me?" Yelled Becky at her captors.
"Haha, isn't that obvious sweetheart?" Said the man infront of her. Becky gulped loudly as she already knew what they wanted. She couldn't imagine having to 'do' things to these horrible men.
"Listen up baby, this is what you have to do, you need to pleasure me and my negros here, we want you to suck and fuck our big nigger cocks until we all outta cum! Got it?" Said the man behind her, whose voice she recognised as the homeless man outside who heckled her. This made her feel sick, not only would she have to put out for these men, but they were disgusting old tramps! This made Becky sad, at the knowledge that she would be robbed of her precious virginity.
"Please don't do this please!" She desperatley pleaded, as if the gang would pass up this golden oppertunity.
"Listen bitch you better get started or we gonna come in there and bust you up!!!" Ordered the man to the left, Becky was frightened by the mens tones now, she reluctantly accepted that she would have to endure this or face grave consequences.
"Why don't you stand up and take off them clothes", Ordered the front man. Becky slowly stood up, a tear slowly running down her pretty cheek. She grasped the top of her vest and slowly pulled it up over her head, revealing her sports bra she wore whilst dancing. She dropped her vest and proceeded to pull down her tights.
"Slower! And move yo hips from side to side like a naughty slut!" Yelled the man behind her. Becky sighed and started crying harder. With extreme humiliation she began moving her hips in a seductive manner as she slowly pulled her tights down her smooth legs. It was only at this point that Becky noticed the eye holes further up the cubicle wall, which made her feel even more humiliated.
Becky was standing in her white panties and her black sports bra.
"Now lets see them titties girl", laughed the tramp to the right of the cubicle. Becky took a deep breath, then reached back and unclasped her bra, she peeled it off her breasts and dropped it on the floor.
"Wooow look at them, they perfect titties!" Beckys eyes widened as she noticed that the four cocks had grown from their flaccid state into full 10 inch rock hard poles. Beckys mind was now full of disgust and horror, but also of fascination and wonder, she could never have sex with something that big!
"That's right get a good look baby, don't worry you'll find out soon enough how good they feel, now take off your panties and get on your knees!"
Becky nervously pulled down her white panties, revealing her hairless, beautiful pussy and kneeled down on her pile of clothes, trembling in fear. Becky was looking into the eye of the cock infront of her, she couldn't believe how thick it was.
"Now grab my cock bitch!" Ordered the tramp infront of her. Hesitantley Becky reached out, almost in slow motion and softly placed her hand around the middle of his thick shaft. Becky was in shock of how warm it felt, it felt as if it was going to burn through her hand.
"Mmmmm, your hand feels good girl, now pump me", Becky reluctantly began to move her right hand slowly up and down the shaft of the tramps mammoth member.
"Ohhh yes, now spit on my cock baby, get it nice and wet, comon don't be shy!", Becky was confused, she had never spat before, she thought it was disgusting and wrong, but these rapists wanted her to do it, so she gathered the fluids in her mouth and spat onto the top of the tramps shaft. She placed her hand back on his cock, cringing at the slimy spit and continued to rub up and down the long shaft.
"Rub the head!" Ordered the bum, Becky had been avoiding touching the shiny purple mushroom out of disgust. Becky wrapped her hand over the head of the tramps cock, it was smooth and slimy and made his whole body shake with pleasure.
"Oooooh yes that's the stuff!" Screamed the homeless old man, Becky continued to rub all the way up and down the mammoth cock. Becky continued to rub the massive cock up and down for a few long minutes, before the tramp told her to stop.
"Now baby i want you to suck me, I want you to suck me until I cum, then you will suck all of us". Becky was scared now, it was the moment of truth she has to do what she always thought was disguisting, she had heard girls talking about blowjobs and the idea repulsed her, now she is being forced to do it to four horrible black tramps. Becky composed herself, wiping away her tears, she exhaled deeply and moved her head closer to the giant cock infront of her. Becky closed her eyes and cautiously extended her tongue. Her wet tongue dabbed the tip of the old tramps cock and moved all around the head slowly. Becky cringed at the salty taste of the precum that was oozing from the tip.
"Don't just lick me bitch! Get your mouth on my cock! And don't neglect my niggers, get your hands pumping on their cocks!" Ordered the homeless rapist. Becky looked from side to side at the twitching hard cocks coming out of the other holes. She sighed deeply and moved both of her hands onto two hard cocks, pumping slowly up and down the thick shafts. Becky moved her head forward again and nervously placed her mouth around the large mushroom head of the tramps cock.
"Now move your mouth up and down and use your tongue!". Becky wet the cock with her tongue as she began to push forward with her head, she reached halfway down the long pole and then pulled back up. She felt completely abused and humiliated in this position, being forced to suck a cock and wank two more at the same time. All three of the tramps were moaning as Becky pumped with her hands and sucked up and down the cock in her mouth. New tears of despair ran down her cheeks as she ran her tongue over the head of the bums giant cock, hearing moans of ecstasy from the bum.
Becky was becoming more comfortable by the minute and the task was becoming easier to her, as horrible as it was. Becky's mouth was gliding half way down the tramps 10 inch cock, as she had developed an easy rhythm pumping the two cocks to her sides. The tramp whos cock Becky was sucking told her to stay still. Becky froze her mouth half way down his massive cock. The tramp then began to move slowly back and forth, fucking Beckys warm little mouth, the increased depth the tramp could get caused becky to gag a little when he pushed forwards. After a few minutes the tramp picked up his pace, banging hard against the cubicle door with his body, slamming his cock into Beckys mouth, ropes of spit hanging from Beckys chin as she choked and gagged from the mouth fucking. After a couple of minutes of the rough mouth fucking, Becky heard loud animal type groans from the tramp, he picked up his pace to a rapid speed, then stopped with his cock just over half way into Beckys mouth.
"Ooooh fuck yeah here it comes bitch!" The tramp shouted as he dribbled a few heavy dollops of thick white jizz into the back of Beckys mouth. Becky got a shock by the thick white fluid and gagged on the dirty salty taste, she didn't take her mouth off of his cock as he told her. Becky also didn't want to swallow the horrible stuff.
"Take your mouth off and show me the cum on your tongue!", the tramp ordered. Disguisted, Becky gathered the thick goo on her tongue, looked up toward the eyeholes and showed it to the perverted rapist.
"Wow that's hot, now swallow it!" Becky sighed in despair of the order, she closed her mouth and struggled to swallow the jizz, gagging a little as it slid down her throat. Throughout focusing on her previous ordeal she completely forgot that she had been wanking the two cocks to her sides, and that now she would have to give the same service to the three other cocks.
"Come here girl!" The man to the right commanded as if he were talking to a dog. Becky begrudgingly moved across the cold tiled floor on her knees to the tramps massive cock to her right. Becky took the mammoth cock in her slimy hands and slowly rubbed it up and down. Becky was robotically following orders, she knew she had no choice but to get through this, she knew what to do now after the last man.
"Oh yeah suck me bitch!" Barked the tramp, Becky took a deep breath and placed her mouth over the shiny large head of the cock, she ran her toungue around it, tasting his salty precum.
"You gonna give me a tittie fuck now bitch!"
"W-what?" Becky didn't know what he was talking about, she had never even heard of a tittie fuck before.
"Jesus christ bitch, put my dick inbetween your titties and move up and down!" Becky reluctantly responded, resigned to giving the disgusting tramp whatever he wanted. Becky shuffled on her knees in order to reach his mammoth pole with her tits, and then took her large, firm breasts in her hands, and starting rubbing them slowly and shakily up and down around the bums thick slimy cock. She nervously rubbed her soft breasts around his dick for minutes, trying her best to stimulate the horrible balck tramp to keep them happy.
She felt completely humiliated, with her large breasts exposed, surrounding his huge, hard penis, as a few trickles of tears continued to run down her face.
"Comon slut faster!" Yelled the tramp, Becky increased the pace of her movements, her feet were getting tired and her legs were shaking, she wondered how long this could possibly go on for. She got her answer when she recognised the grunts coming from the tramp, she kept up the tittie fucking until he told her to stay still, Becky froze squeezing her large breasts around his cock, the tramp started to thrust his hips with a rapid pace, burning between Beckys breasts from the friction then hie too froze.
"Ohhhhhh my god fuck yes!" He screamed as Becky looked down at the slimy pink head of his cock, she saw it slowly open as a stream of creamy white jizz flowed out of his cock and down between her cleavage and surrounding his cock.
It was 16:30 on Friday evening, Becky was walking alone through the park, she had just finished her after college dance classes, which she regualrly attends, and was now heading home.
Becky was wearing a long black coat, to her kness which covered her tight dance pants and equally tight white vest. Her hair was straight and black, flowing just down below her shoulders, ontop of a face that surely belongs to an angel. Her body was firm and tight, no small part down to the dancing she does, however it was still womanly and smooth, not muscly. Other than her beautiful face, the most noticable part of her body, well, certainley from a mans point of view, was her impressive chest. Her breasts stuck out proudly from her chest, large, but firm and in place, not a bit of sag to them, which was a miracle due to their size, roughly 42D, but maybe slightly larger.
"Oooh, i'm busting for a pee," Becky thought to herself. She was walking through the park and knew there was a small public toilet there, however it was rarely used due to its reputation as a hotspot for drug deals, rapes and murders (according to the news). "Screw it, this can't wait," Becky hurried, knees closed tightly together towards the small, graffitied toilet in the corner of the park.
"Hey baby," Becky looked over at a group of four black, old homeless men sat on a bench eyeing her. Becky shrugged off the mens lude comments and whistles as she rushed into the toilet. There had been an increase in homeless people recently in the town, probably something to do with the economic situation, especially in the black community of town. Which was a shame as the town used to be a nice place, now however it has had a vast increase in crime.
Becky shut the door behind her,removed her long coat, lowered her tights and panties and sat down on the toilet.
"Aghhhh," Becky released with a pleasurable sense of relief, as she peed she took time to study the horrible cubicle she was in, vulgar graffiti and images were on all sides, and confusingly, she also noticed three fist sized holes, one infront, one left and one right. Becky jumped as she thought she heard something outside the cubicle, but after listening closely she shrugged it off. Becky stood up, put her coat back on and reached for the door handle, it came off.
"SHIT!" Becky shouted at her predicament, she clawed at the sides of the door frantically trying to force it open, but with no luck.
Becky then heard multiple footsteps outside the cubicle.
"Hello? Can you help me please i'm stuck in here!" She shouted to the mystery people on the other side.
"Are you okay in there miss?" A man on the other side asked.
"Oh thankyou, can you help me out of here please?"
"Sure, sit on the toilet and cover your face and close your eyes, i'm gonna break the door down!"
Becky complied by getting in a ball position on the toilet, arms covering her face. She heard noises and mumbled discussions outside but after a minute the man had made no attempt to break the door down. Becky removed her arms from her face and opened her eyes.
"Aaaargh!" Becky screamed when she saw the sights infront of her, through the 3 holes she had noticed earlier there were 3, monstrous,flaccid black cocks. Becky backed away and crawled back onto the toilet, she kept backing up until she felt something bump the back of her head. Becky turned her head around only to have another giant black cock brush across her cheek and rest on her nose.
"AAAAAGH!" Becky screamed again and fell backwards onto the cold tiled floor of the cubicle, Becky started to panic as she assessed her predicament, surrounded on all four sides by black cocks and with no way out.
"What do you want from me?" Yelled Becky at her captors.
"Haha, isn't that obvious sweetheart?" Said the man infront of her. Becky gulped loudly as she already knew what they wanted. She couldn't imagine having to 'do' things to these horrible men.
"Listen up baby, this is what you have to do, you need to pleasure me and my negros here, we want you to suck and fuck our big nigger cocks until we all outta cum! Got it?" Said the man behind her, whose voice she recognised as the homeless man outside who heckled her. This made her feel sick, not only would she have to put out for these men, but they were disgusting old tramps! This made Becky sad, at the knowledge that she would be robbed of her precious virginity.
"Please don't do this please!" She desperatley pleaded, as if the gang would pass up this golden oppertunity.
"Listen bitch you better get started or we gonna come in there and bust you up!!!" Ordered the man to the left, Becky was frightened by the mens tones now, she reluctantly accepted that she would have to endure this or face grave consequences.
"Why don't you stand up and take off them clothes", Ordered the front man. Becky slowly stood up, a tear slowly running down her pretty cheek. She grasped the top of her vest and slowly pulled it up over her head, revealing her sports bra she wore whilst dancing. She dropped her vest and proceeded to pull down her tights.
"Slower! And move yo hips from side to side like a naughty slut!" Yelled the man behind her. Becky sighed and started crying harder. With extreme humiliation she began moving her hips in a seductive manner as she slowly pulled her tights down her smooth legs. It was only at this point that Becky noticed the eye holes further up the cubicle wall, which made her feel even more humiliated.
Becky was standing in her white panties and her black sports bra.
"Now lets see them titties girl", laughed the tramp to the right of the cubicle. Becky took a deep breath, then reached back and unclasped her bra, she peeled it off her breasts and dropped it on the floor.
"Wooow look at them, they perfect titties!" Beckys eyes widened as she noticed that the four cocks had grown from their flaccid state into full 10 inch rock hard poles. Beckys mind was now full of disgust and horror, but also of fascination and wonder, she could never have sex with something that big!
"That's right get a good look baby, don't worry you'll find out soon enough how good they feel, now take off your panties and get on your knees!"
Becky nervously pulled down her white panties, revealing her hairless, beautiful pussy and kneeled down on her pile of clothes, trembling in fear. Becky was looking into the eye of the cock infront of her, she couldn't believe how thick it was.
"Now grab my cock bitch!" Ordered the tramp infront of her. Hesitantley Becky reached out, almost in slow motion and softly placed her hand around the middle of his thick shaft. Becky was in shock of how warm it felt, it felt as if it was going to burn through her hand.
"Mmmmm, your hand feels good girl, now pump me", Becky reluctantly began to move her right hand slowly up and down the shaft of the tramps mammoth member.
"Ohhh yes, now spit on my cock baby, get it nice and wet, comon don't be shy!", Becky was confused, she had never spat before, she thought it was disgusting and wrong, but these rapists wanted her to do it, so she gathered the fluids in her mouth and spat onto the top of the tramps shaft. She placed her hand back on his cock, cringing at the slimy spit and continued to rub up and down the long shaft.
"Rub the head!" Ordered the bum, Becky had been avoiding touching the shiny purple mushroom out of disgust. Becky wrapped her hand over the head of the tramps cock, it was smooth and slimy and made his whole body shake with pleasure.
"Oooooh yes that's the stuff!" Screamed the homeless old man, Becky continued to rub all the way up and down the mammoth cock. Becky continued to rub the massive cock up and down for a few long minutes, before the tramp told her to stop.
"Now baby i want you to suck me, I want you to suck me until I cum, then you will suck all of us". Becky was scared now, it was the moment of truth she has to do what she always thought was disguisting, she had heard girls talking about blowjobs and the idea repulsed her, now she is being forced to do it to four horrible black tramps. Becky composed herself, wiping away her tears, she exhaled deeply and moved her head closer to the giant cock infront of her. Becky closed her eyes and cautiously extended her tongue. Her wet tongue dabbed the tip of the old tramps cock and moved all around the head slowly. Becky cringed at the salty taste of the precum that was oozing from the tip.
"Don't just lick me bitch! Get your mouth on my cock! And don't neglect my niggers, get your hands pumping on their cocks!" Ordered the homeless rapist. Becky looked from side to side at the twitching hard cocks coming out of the other holes. She sighed deeply and moved both of her hands onto two hard cocks, pumping slowly up and down the thick shafts. Becky moved her head forward again and nervously placed her mouth around the large mushroom head of the tramps cock.
"Now move your mouth up and down and use your tongue!". Becky wet the cock with her tongue as she began to push forward with her head, she reached halfway down the long pole and then pulled back up. She felt completely abused and humiliated in this position, being forced to suck a cock and wank two more at the same time. All three of the tramps were moaning as Becky pumped with her hands and sucked up and down the cock in her mouth. New tears of despair ran down her cheeks as she ran her tongue over the head of the bums giant cock, hearing moans of ecstasy from the bum.
Becky was becoming more comfortable by the minute and the task was becoming easier to her, as horrible as it was. Becky's mouth was gliding half way down the tramps 10 inch cock, as she had developed an easy rhythm pumping the two cocks to her sides. The tramp whos cock Becky was sucking told her to stay still. Becky froze her mouth half way down his massive cock. The tramp then began to move slowly back and forth, fucking Beckys warm little mouth, the increased depth the tramp could get caused becky to gag a little when he pushed forwards. After a few minutes the tramp picked up his pace, banging hard against the cubicle door with his body, slamming his cock into Beckys mouth, ropes of spit hanging from Beckys chin as she choked and gagged from the mouth fucking. After a couple of minutes of the rough mouth fucking, Becky heard loud animal type groans from the tramp, he picked up his pace to a rapid speed, then stopped with his cock just over half way into Beckys mouth.
"Ooooh fuck yeah here it comes bitch!" The tramp shouted as he dribbled a few heavy dollops of thick white jizz into the back of Beckys mouth. Becky got a shock by the thick white fluid and gagged on the dirty salty taste, she didn't take her mouth off of his cock as he told her. Becky also didn't want to swallow the horrible stuff.
"Take your mouth off and show me the cum on your tongue!", the tramp ordered. Disguisted, Becky gathered the thick goo on her tongue, looked up toward the eyeholes and showed it to the perverted rapist.
"Wow that's hot, now swallow it!" Becky sighed in despair of the order, she closed her mouth and struggled to swallow the jizz, gagging a little as it slid down her throat. Throughout focusing on her previous ordeal she completely forgot that she had been wanking the two cocks to her sides, and that now she would have to give the same service to the three other cocks.
"Come here girl!" The man to the right commanded as if he were talking to a dog. Becky begrudgingly moved across the cold tiled floor on her knees to the tramps massive cock to her right. Becky took the mammoth cock in her slimy hands and slowly rubbed it up and down. Becky was robotically following orders, she knew she had no choice but to get through this, she knew what to do now after the last man.
"Oh yeah suck me bitch!" Barked the tramp, Becky took a deep breath and placed her mouth over the shiny large head of the cock, she ran her toungue around it, tasting his salty precum.
"You gonna give me a tittie fuck now bitch!"
"W-what?" Becky didn't know what he was talking about, she had never even heard of a tittie fuck before.
"Jesus christ bitch, put my dick inbetween your titties and move up and down!" Becky reluctantly responded, resigned to giving the disgusting tramp whatever he wanted. Becky shuffled on her knees in order to reach his mammoth pole with her tits, and then took her large, firm breasts in her hands, and starting rubbing them slowly and shakily up and down around the bums thick slimy cock. She nervously rubbed her soft breasts around his dick for minutes, trying her best to stimulate the horrible balck tramp to keep them happy.
She felt completely humiliated, with her large breasts exposed, surrounding his huge, hard penis, as a few trickles of tears continued to run down her face.
"Comon slut faster!" Yelled the tramp, Becky increased the pace of her movements, her feet were getting tired and her legs were shaking, she wondered how long this could possibly go on for. She got her answer when she recognised the grunts coming from the tramp, she kept up the tittie fucking until he told her to stay still, Becky froze squeezing her large breasts around his cock, the tramp started to thrust his hips with a rapid pace, burning between Beckys breasts from the friction then hie too froze.
"Ohhhhhh my god fuck yes!" He screamed as Becky looked down at the slimy pink head of his cock, she saw it slowly open as a stream of creamy white jizz flowed out of his cock and down between her cleavage and surrounding his cock.
