unexpected, unplanned.

[txnjiffy]

I have read many of the "Loving Wives" stories & find that it's hard to find a really good one anymore. they all start with or state at some point in the story that "we discussed it before", "we always talked about it", We've been swapping..", "I always fantasized about it". anyway, the point is they all mention in one way or another that the idea was already there.

I'd like to read some, where it was never discussed, neither had even remotely thought about it ever, it wasn't a fantasy....etc.

I enjoy the one's that are from the husbands point of view & he happens on a situation between his wife and another. he's in turmoil but can't get himself to interupt. on the wife's side, she didn't plan on it & maybe doesn't even realize what she's doing or who, possibly in an intoxicated position.

I once read one where a husband asks a good friend to help his drunk wife to their bugalow while he went to check out of hotel, he forgets the bill & returns to the bungalow & through the window he catches his friend taking advantage of his passed out wife. It starts with him just laying her on bed and making her comfortable, then going from there....the next day the wife realizes she had sex but assumes it was with husband & husband never tells her. That story was HOT!

GloryHole: Unexpected in a porno booth would be good with naive wife & couples first visit ever to adult video store.

oh yea, as soon as any story mentions " my wife has 34dd tits", I close the story and continue searching. I like more of the average MILF next door type that are more believable.

Well, there you are. my opinion & suggestions. I have more ideas if anyone is interested, just ask. hope to see some good stories from all soon.

txnjiffy

 

[bisexplicit]

I think the reason that there is a mention of previous discussion is so that the author doesn't get accused of condoning cheating. Apparently, the Loving Wives category is quite controversial.

 

[Texguy84]

There was one Loving Wives story that played it rather straight, as far as making stories over-the-top goes. The guy gets a video in the mail (from a hidden camera) showing his wife talking to the neighbor, having a drink with him, and then engaging in anal sex. Divorce ensues, wife tries desperately to get husband back, etc.

Some time passes, both husband and wife end up staying in the same social circle, and run into eachother from time to time (and have, for the most part, gotten back to civil, if tense, terms with eachother). Guy's new girlfriend hits it off with the ex-wife, and pretty much forces the guy to reconcile with her and listen to her.

Turns out, the neighbor drugged the wife, and she had no control over what was happening. A careful re-watching of the video shows the guy dropping something into her glass, and a re-marriage ensues. Then some vague comment from the narrator about how we won't have to worry about the neighbor anymore...

Very good story, even if it was light on the sex. Very emotional, and it found a more or less plausible way for things to be fixed at the end without either party becoming cuckolded or sexually promiscuous.

 

[Texguy84]

Oh, and I laugh at the Loving Wives category, cause I've written stories that went to MUCH worse places than those things do, and all I've gotten were compliments.

I think my readers are a bunch of perverts.

 

[txnjiffy]

In the stories that I appreciate, there really isn't any cheating. That would be a "cheating wives" forum. My idea is, as I explained earlier, that the husband is present whether he happens upon the situation or is involved from the beginning and gets aroused watching his wife being taken.

I personally find that if it has never crossed the mind of either husband or wife, yet for whatever reason, they find themselves in a sexual situation neither is real sure about, but go with it anyway, makes a better story.


...hmmm. I may have to try my hand at writing a story that I would want to read.

I smell rubber burning

 

[manloveswomen]

I like the element of surprise too. I've never read the Loving Wives stories but many of the stories I've read have had situations where everything is discussed in advance.

I'd like to see more stories where there are strange twists & someone finds themselves with someone totally unexpected.

 

[jeninflorida]

I think the reason that there is a mention of previous discussion is so that the author doesn't get accused of condoning cheating. Apparently, the Loving Wives category is quite controversial.

yes, very controversial....and so many people hate them...yet they keep on reading LW stories and leave nasty comments. most people love sex, most people love to watch others, most poeple are afraid to admit it!

its a fine line, between planning things and going with the moment.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

This idea has merit. It would be interesting to see a tale where neither partner ever had a notion of swinging, cuckolding, or any other sexual kink (for lack of better word) before "something happens".

I'm sure it could be written. But right now I'm having difficulty seeing a husband turned on watching his wife cheating on him or being taken advantage of.

 

[jeninflorida]

I have a story, where the couple didn't talk about having a 3 some.....i'm sending the story to an editor right now and hopefully will submit early next week. the story is around 4,000 words....

I have read many of the "Loving Wives" stories & find that it's hard to find a really good one anymore. they all start with or state at some point in the story that "we discussed it before", "we always talked about it", We've been swapping..", "I always fantasized about it". anyway, the point is they all mention in one way or another that the idea was already there.

I'd like to read some, where it was never discussed, neither had even remotely thought about it ever, it wasn't a fantasy....etc.

I enjoy the one's that are from the husbands point of view & he happens on a situation between his wife and another. he's in turmoil but can't get himself to interupt. on the wife's side, she didn't plan on it & maybe doesn't even realize what she's doing or who, possibly in an intoxicated position.

I once read one where a husband asks a good friend to help his drunk wife to their bugalow while he went to check out of hotel, he forgets the bill & returns to the bungalow & through the window he catches his friend taking advantage of his passed out wife. It starts with him just laying her on bed and making her comfortable, then going from there....the next day the wife realizes she had sex but assumes it was with husband & husband never tells her. That story was HOT!

GloryHole: Unexpected in a porno booth would be good with naive wife & couples first visit ever to adult video store.

oh yea, as soon as any story mentions " my wife has 34dd tits", I close the story and continue searching. I like more of the average MILF next door type that are more believable.

Well, there you are. my opinion & suggestions. I have more ideas if anyone is interested, just ask. hope to see some good stories from all soon.

txnjiffy

 

[jeninflorida]

This story will be submitted on friday (10/13/2006), should post a week from that....

I have read many of the "Loving Wives" stories & find that it's hard to find a really good one anymore. they all start with or state at some point in the story that "we discussed it before", "we always talked about it", We've been swapping..", "I always fantasized about it". anyway, the point is they all mention in one way or another that the idea was already there.

I'd like to read some, where it was never discussed, neither had even remotely thought about it ever, it wasn't a fantasy....etc.

I enjoy the one's that are from the husbands point of view & he happens on a situation between his wife and another. he's in turmoil but can't get himself to interupt. on the wife's side, she didn't plan on it & maybe doesn't even realize what she's doing or who, possibly in an intoxicated position.

I once read one where a husband asks a good friend to help his drunk wife to their bugalow while he went to check out of hotel, he forgets the bill & returns to the bungalow & through the window he catches his friend taking advantage of his passed out wife. It starts with him just laying her on bed and making her comfortable, then going from there....the next day the wife realizes she had sex but assumes it was with husband & husband never tells her. That story was HOT!

GloryHole: Unexpected in a porno booth would be good with naive wife & couples first visit ever to adult video store.

oh yea, as soon as any story mentions " my wife has 34dd tits", I close the story and continue searching. I like more of the average MILF next door type that are more believable.

Well, there you are. my opinion & suggestions. I have more ideas if anyone is interested, just ask. hope to see some good stories from all soon.

txnjiffy

 

[Lovepotion69]

I've only written one story in the Loving Wives category. It was for a Halloween contest a few years back and it did receive good reviews.

You may find it in my profile; "Halloween Masquerade"

 

[txnjiffy]

Thanks jeninflorida, I'll be looking for it. Also will look for lovepotion's.

 

[jeninflorida]

Thanks jeninflorida, I'll be looking for it. Also will look for lovepotion's.

email me at Jeninflorida_2006 at yahoo.com and I will send you a copy. I'm looking for some feedback

 

[jeninflorida]

This story will be submitted friday, so it should be online by the 27th

I have read many of the "Loving Wives" stories & find that it's hard to find a really good one anymore. they all start with or state at some point in the story that "we discussed it before", "we always talked about it", We've been swapping..", "I always fantasized about it". anyway, the point is they all mention in one way or another that the idea was already there.

I'd like to read some, where it was never discussed, neither had even remotely thought about it ever, it wasn't a fantasy....etc.

I enjoy the one's that are from the husbands point of view & he happens on a situation between his wife and another. he's in turmoil but can't get himself to interupt. on the wife's side, she didn't plan on it & maybe doesn't even realize what she's doing or who, possibly in an intoxicated position.

I once read one where a husband asks a good friend to help his drunk wife to their bugalow while he went to check out of hotel, he forgets the bill & returns to the bungalow & through the window he catches his friend taking advantage of his passed out wife. It starts with him just laying her on bed and making her comfortable, then going from there....the next day the wife realizes she had sex but assumes it was with husband & husband never tells her. That story was HOT!

GloryHole: Unexpected in a porno booth would be good with naive wife & couples first visit ever to adult video store.

oh yea, as soon as any story mentions " my wife has 34dd tits", I close the story and continue searching. I like more of the average MILF next door type that are more believable.

Well, there you are. my opinion & suggestions. I have more ideas if anyone is interested, just ask. hope to see some good stories from all soon.

txnjiffy

 

[Fantasies_only]

Take from the Japanese.

Cute girl (18 for America) with mini skirt (no panties), big boobs, and open blouse on train.
Window is open, and skirt ruffles in the breeze.
A sudden wind comes, and blows skirt very high, at same time, train hits bumps in track, and a standing or walking man is jostled onto her boobs, and another who is masturbating, into her butt.

She accidentally sits on an erect penis when the train starts bucking widely and entering a dark tunnel.