Understanding your audiance

[BlackSnake]

You'd have a better idea of what he's talking about if you skimmed the story in question, Charley. It's pretty heavy, and not so much erotic as it's about sex, you see. If any guy goes to it with the idea of spanking the monkey (My favorite phrase today!) he probably won't be happy with this one. All the same, it's excellent- publishing quality, I'd say.

Thanks omnipotent one.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Thanks omnipotent one.

kinda grandiose, huh?

It was a long day, what can I say...

All the same, I do think it's good writing.

 

[BlackSnake]

I hear you. The day before thanksgiving I had my wallet lifted/lost at Walmart ($1,416.00 plus the important stuff:driver's license, ssn card, bus. cards with info on backs, some credit cards, and a few old pictures). I'm glad it's the holidays otherwise I'd be pissed and kicking the shit out of everything.

Thanks for the props

 

[Stella_Omega]

I hear you. The day before thanksgiving I had my wallet lifted/lost at Walmart ($1,416.00 plus the important stuff:driver's license, ssn card, bus. cards with info on backs, some credit cards, and a few old pictures). I'm glad it's the holidays otherwise I'd be pissed and kicking the shit out of everything.

Thanks for the props

oh, Blacksnake, I'm so sorry!
That is devastating when it happens. Wish I WERE omnipotent, you'd have itall back in your hands.
damn, damn damn, that sucks.

 

[BlackSnake]

oh, Blacksnake, I'm so sorry!
That is devastating when it happens. Wish I WERE omnipotent, you'd have itall back in your hands.
damn, damn damn, that sucks.

It happens, I wasn't paying enough attention to what I was doing. I should have went to my bank and made a deposit. I have a trust issue when it comes to dealing with new people and money. I went to their bank, which there is only four or five branches. I cashed it and should have gone to my bank instead of Walmart.

Anyways, I said ouch. It's the holiday season, and I've already gotten 2 blowjobs from girls after only knowing them twenty minutes. I'm good.

 

[JRaven]

Anyways, I said ouch. It's the holiday season, and I've already gotten 2 blowjobs from girls after only knowing them twenty minutes. I'm good.

What bank is this that you can make deposits like that?!? I want to make sure my husband doesn't ever bank there!

I finally got around to reading "Playa Playa: Pat". I felt sorry for Pat. She certainly didn't get a very good deal out of life. Chris was both hated and liked. He had to grow up through all that, took care of his mother, then eventually took advantage of her.

A very well written story. Definitely publishing quality.

Jenny

 

[BlackSnake]

What bank is this that you can make deposits like that?!? I want to make sure my husband doesn't ever bank there!

I finally got around to reading "Playa Playa: Pat". I felt sorry for Pat. She certainly didn't get a very good deal out of life. Chris was both hated and liked. He had to grow up through all that, took care of his mother, then eventually took advantage of her.

A very well written story. Definitely publishing quality.

Jenny

Thank you. I felt sorry for Pat too, but I wanted to screw her as well. This is the type of story that I like. The characters are not all good, but they have their reasons for being bad.

Georgian Bank is the one I went to cash my check. It's not my normal bank, it's the bank the company use that I just started working for. Georgian bank is for from my work and home, so I was in a hurry, and didn't take care.

 

[MichelleLovesTo]

I read it -- very well-written and with a protag charismatic enough not to be as hated as he deserves to be.

 

[BlackSnake]

I read it -- very well-written and with a protag charismatic enough not to be as hated as he deserves to be.

Thank you. It makes me feel good that you got what I was trying to protray in the character.