Whisky7up
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There is a story in the St Valentine contest that includes a retrospective scene of sexual activity involving characters under 18.
Valentine's Day Anniversary by Jonathan Pryce
The first time we made love, when we lost our virginity to one another, she was 16 and I was 15. I lay down on the bed, on my back, and she lay atop me, still kissing me, always kissing me, and I was lost in the warmness of her mouth and the feeling of her tongue dancing with mine, and her legs straddled mine as my cock pressed snuggly against her. I didn't move, not knowing what to do, well, knowing what to do but I'd heard the first time could be painful for girls and in that regard I didn't know what to do but I knew I didn't want to hurt her. So I let her control the pace, let her press herself against me, slowly pushing me inside her, and I held back with all I could for being a 15 year old boy full of raging hormones. If she felt pain, she didn't let on. We moved slowly, and I could swear I held my breath for minutes, forgetting to breathe as she began to pick up the pace. After I finally exhaled and breathed back in my hips had taken on a mind of their own and began meeting her hips thrust for thrust. We never stopped kissing each other, not once, not until her body started trembling and she started panting, and she raised her head up from mine and began to moan soft little moans that turned into soft little cries that turned in a much longer, extended groan. I felt my world turn upside down and my cock exploded inside her as she milked me in her waves. Then, still buried inside her, we kissed again, and laughed and smiled and held each other so tight. It was almost perfect. Almost, but not completely, because of the fact that I still had to leave her, alone in her bed, alone in her house, since I was still only 15 and I had a curfew with no negotiation.
It was queried by anon "Doesn't the underage rule apply to contest entries??"
and answered by Doormouse "You are allowed to recall back to times of pre-legal age activities."
But last year I had a story Reach For The Star rejected for the following flashback to when my character was 16.
In bed she was suddenly aware her hand was between her thighs rubbing herself gently. It felt good but she never knew why. And since it felt good, she felt better and carried on. Sometimes she used two fingers, sometimes just one. Occasionally she would push a finger inside and she felt a little wetness.
and then with her teddy bear:
She held onto Teddy tightly, not realising his leg was between hers. She soon found by pushing and pulling that Teddy's leg rubbed up and down her pussy. It was glorious.She had what she later knew to be her first orgasm.
I queried the rejection and was told that only a brief reference could be made (eg 'I lost my viginity at 16') and I had to 'age' my character.
Could somebody please explain why the contest entry was okay and mine was not?
Valentine's Day Anniversary by Jonathan Pryce
The first time we made love, when we lost our virginity to one another, she was 16 and I was 15. I lay down on the bed, on my back, and she lay atop me, still kissing me, always kissing me, and I was lost in the warmness of her mouth and the feeling of her tongue dancing with mine, and her legs straddled mine as my cock pressed snuggly against her. I didn't move, not knowing what to do, well, knowing what to do but I'd heard the first time could be painful for girls and in that regard I didn't know what to do but I knew I didn't want to hurt her. So I let her control the pace, let her press herself against me, slowly pushing me inside her, and I held back with all I could for being a 15 year old boy full of raging hormones. If she felt pain, she didn't let on. We moved slowly, and I could swear I held my breath for minutes, forgetting to breathe as she began to pick up the pace. After I finally exhaled and breathed back in my hips had taken on a mind of their own and began meeting her hips thrust for thrust. We never stopped kissing each other, not once, not until her body started trembling and she started panting, and she raised her head up from mine and began to moan soft little moans that turned into soft little cries that turned in a much longer, extended groan. I felt my world turn upside down and my cock exploded inside her as she milked me in her waves. Then, still buried inside her, we kissed again, and laughed and smiled and held each other so tight. It was almost perfect. Almost, but not completely, because of the fact that I still had to leave her, alone in her bed, alone in her house, since I was still only 15 and I had a curfew with no negotiation.
It was queried by anon "Doesn't the underage rule apply to contest entries??"
and answered by Doormouse "You are allowed to recall back to times of pre-legal age activities."
But last year I had a story Reach For The Star rejected for the following flashback to when my character was 16.
In bed she was suddenly aware her hand was between her thighs rubbing herself gently. It felt good but she never knew why. And since it felt good, she felt better and carried on. Sometimes she used two fingers, sometimes just one. Occasionally she would push a finger inside and she felt a little wetness.
and then with her teddy bear:
She held onto Teddy tightly, not realising his leg was between hers. She soon found by pushing and pulling that Teddy's leg rubbed up and down her pussy. It was glorious.She had what she later knew to be her first orgasm.
I queried the rejection and was told that only a brief reference could be made (eg 'I lost my viginity at 16') and I had to 'age' my character.
Could somebody please explain why the contest entry was okay and mine was not?
