Uncle is too you to be a father figure but not to be a fuck buddy

[Mesercher]

Brother 28
sister 36
niece (to the brothers so the sisters daughters) 18

28 year old brother moves in with his 36 year old sister who as a 18 year old daughter. It weird because he sees both his sister and his niece as about his age. He actually gets along with his niece more like a friend and the frustration of his sister who was hoping that he could be like a father figure.

Eventually brother and niece start fucking. When his sister find out she is surprisingly relieved as she would rather her daughter fuck Brother than some random guy. They fuck a lot now even fuck while one the phone or Skype with Sister when she in on business trips. Eventually she gives in and fuck along with them and get pregnant Brother starts acting more as a father figure and boy friend and they become a happy family

 

[Hypoxia]

Brother 28
sister 36
niece (to the brothers so the sisters daughters) 18

If I were to write this (and it *could* work in my A TASTE OF INCEST story cycle) I would tweak the timeline. Big sister Star was knocked-up young and birthed daughter Dove at age 16. (No tale of underage sex; just report the fact.) Now, Star is 34, Dove is 18, and brother Bran is somewhere between 24 and 30, depending on the intended plot development.

If 24, Bran is very close in age to Dove and will never be a father figure. The sibs have possible tensions due to their age difference; Star may have been distant from her punk brother, or she could almost have been his surrogate mother. Either way, he grows to appreciate her more as he matures.

If 30, Bran *could* fill the 'daddy' role in Star's script, but his relationship with Dove would be iffy; he's over half again her age, he's had women, she's seen him as an uncle all her life, etc. For the story, he needs to be a hero figure in her eyes, the unattainable ideal that she can now hope for. Those other women don't know what they threw away, etc.

The author must explore *why* Bran moved in with the women. If 24, Bran just finished grad school or military service and only seems to be temporarily roosting till he moves on with life. If 30, Bran has suffered some bad shit -- fired, abandoned, busted, whatever -- and he needs a safe haven while he tries to put his life back together.

We also need to know about Star's life as a single mom. Was she abused and abandoned, or a child prostitute, or in a cult, or legally married at age 16 but later abandoned or widowed, or what? How long has Dove's father been out of the picture and why?

All these characters are more interesting if they're damaged, and their coming together is part of their healing. These need to be stories about healing. I am tempted to take a similar approach to my A TASTE OF TURKEY mom/dad pair of stories -- one version where Bran is 24, another with him at 30 or even 32.

Just some thoughts.

 

[sirhugs]

what about a simpler version- Uncle is the proverbial accident of middle aged lust... just turned 18 though his sister is 40...her daughter also 18... someone gets the bright idea to throw a joint birthday bash... the youngsters get liquored up...

 

[Hypoxia]

what about a simpler version- Uncle is the proverbial accident of middle aged lust... just turned 18 though his sister is 40...her daughter also 18... someone gets the bright idea to throw a joint birthday bash... the youngsters get liquored up...

That fits in more with a real-life family structure I'll model in upcoming A TASTE OF INCEST stories.

Real life: The patriarch had three marriages over a three decade period, with kids from each union. The older kids had their own offspring of course. Some kids in the family are older than their next-generation half-aunts and -uncles. And the patriarch did tap his exes in later years, producing little bastards almost a generation younger than their full-blood siblings.

Real life: I don't know for sure of incest amongst this extended clan. (My cousins by marriage.) But I have my suspicions. Keeping track of them all is difficult.

Story life: Hey, this is LIT! Of course they're all gonna fuck! They've voyeured all their lives. I may need to compress the cast of characters to avoid confusion.

All sorts of possible stroker storylines there. Different mood than the OP.

 

[Mesercher]

If I were to write this (and it *could* work in my A TASTE OF INCEST story cycle) I would tweak the timeline. Big sister Star was knocked-up young and birthed daughter Dove at age 16. (No tale of underage sex; just report the fact.) Now, Star is 34, Dove is 18, and brother Bran is somewhere between 24 and 30, depending on the intended plot development.

If 24, Bran is very close in age to Dove and will never be a father figure. The sibs have possible tensions due to their age difference; Star may have been distant from her punk brother, or she could almost have been his surrogate mother. Either way, he grows to appreciate her more as he matures.

If 30, Bran *could* fill the 'daddy' role in Star's script, but his relationship with Dove would be iffy; he's over half again her age, he's had women, she's seen him as an uncle all her life, etc. For the story, he needs to be a hero figure in her eyes, the unattainable ideal that she can now hope for. Those other women don't know what they threw away, etc.

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We also need to know about Star's life as a single mom. Was she abused and abandoned, or a child prostitute, or in a cult, or legally married at age 16 but later abandoned or widowed, or what? How long has Dove's father been out of the picture and why?

he author must explore *why* Bran moved in with the women. If 24, Bran just finished grad school or military service and only seems to be temporarily roosting till he moves on with life. If 30, Bran has suffered some bad shit -- fired, abandoned, busted, whatever -- and he needs a safe haven while he tries to put his life back together.
All these characters are more interesting if they're damaged, and their coming together is part of their healing. These need to be stories about healing. I am tempted to take a similar approach to my A TASTE OF TURKEY mom/dad pair of stories -- one version where Bran is 24, another with him at 30 or even 32.

Just some thoughts.

a lot of that sounds pretty good the motive i had for the brother moving is was that as a young professional rent is hard so is sister is letting him move in as a room mate. she on the other had is divorced to a dead beat husband and is hoping that her brother Uncle could help out around the house. like with his niece's homework or making she she does chores and does not get into trouble during Mom's business trips. i imagined that they are all white collar millennial. tell me what you think with that. so in a way its a coming of age story for all of them but mostly for the Uncle/brother