Ultra Vignettes

size_queenie

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This is less an idea than it is a writing challenge, and who knows, given the long history of literotica, maybe this has been done before.

We've all had to struggle with making our sex scenes fit into a larger context, to have an actual role in character development or a deeply immersive universe that we are trying to create. Sometimes, I wonder if even the greatest erotic authors over-compensate though, and they often don't spend as much thoughtful time on the sex that is happening in their stories because they know their work will be judged on other merits.

So, I wonder if we can get the writers on this board to engage in a little sting fiction exercise. Write a short (somewhere around the 300 word neighborhood) vignette on a single sexual moment. Be as descriptive as you can, but focus as much as possible on the sensual and the experience rather than the context or the character. Whatever that means to you is the best way to do it, obviously, but I'm thinking about really concentrating on the senses that the moment brings. I'd be fascinated to see what we'd all come up with, and the different styles that would emerge.

To guide this little bit of fun, we could all try to write around the same kind of moment. If this takes off, maybe we could try another later. So, why don't we try this:

Write an ultra vignette about your (or your lover's) cock getting hard.
 
If you don't find takers here, you might try the Author's Hangout forum
 
hey queenie.. Im not sure if i am understanding you at the moment. YOu want a single scene of descriptual action with no plot or character developement, or backstory behind it?

example:

The woman watched him from across the stage. She smirked as she saw his arousal rise to the occasion. She stalked him, in her shiny boots, lacy thong, and red scarf about her shoulders as the music blared form the speakers on either side of the room. The closer she got, the more he throbbed. He was sitting in a chair in the front row. His legs were splayed, making his erection obvious to anyone near him.

ect ect. ect.
 
I got the impression she wanted people to write just sex, no backstory, nothing but sex. Oddly enough I just posted one of those, Just A Blowjob, which is exactly that.

Don't ask me how but I managed to get 751 words of a blowjob, no conversation, no explanation, nothing but giving a blowjob from dropping his pants to swallowing. ;)
 
Don't ask me how but I managed to get 751 words of a blowjob, no conversation, no explanation, nothing but giving a blowjob from dropping his pants to swallowing. ;)

That's almost as talented as i am giving one! ;)
 
I'm probably better, I have alot of practice. :p

It was listed yesterday I think, I've gotten 4 email feedbacks on it so far. Most everyone is terribly happy with it. :)
 
Ladies! No need to fight about who gives the better blowjob. This is easily resolved with a simple little contest. I'd be happy to volunteer to be a judge......
 
OK this is so reminding me of a certain night in a bar. Same conversation even, though there were alot more men offering their services. :eek:
 
OK this is so reminding me of a certain night in a bar. Same conversation even, though there were alot more men offering their services. :eek:

So? Did you win?.....Carney (thinking this would be a good story, too)
 
Draw actually, there weren't enough concious men to pick a winner. At the end of it all 6 men were left in the bar, neither one of us was up to blowing anymore and they couldn't pick a winner. :eek:
 
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